Brushing the surface with vibrant tempera
A portrayal composed by imagination
Hidden origins of evil, an arrow of pain
If not subtle depths of realization
Impressions note as forever arrives
Depicting your peculiar conclusion
Capturing ones whole regression
Blossoms a kaleidoscopic illusion
A broken child awaits devotion
Pulverized shards of aqueous glass
Crimson petals a flowing cascade
Paradises torment en masse alas
Eminent above the celestial sphere
Hallucinations of chrome crushes
Sapphire sparks adorn conflagration
Washed by conventional paint brushes
Author notes
13. Art Inspired.
Written July 7th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- ~Options Galore~ by PoeticXDarkness.
500 points, ended January 18, 2006, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Such a lovely painting of words into a mnetal image.
I like the wonderful vocabulary and its usage.
-cheers
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wow..... this was awesome.... by far the best ive read in the contest so far. You depict the imagery so well... Thank you for entering and good luck.
~Laura
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I went back to look at your web page again....and wow...your collection has grown even further!!!!! Good luck with this conest. The host of this contest is the winner (gold) of one of our other contests for people with no trophys. She too, will soon have a big collection. Good luck with the contest. This is a good poem.
Cheryl
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Your imagery is spendid in your poem. The use of methapores is wonderful as well. I think your choice of words makes it very readable ane enjoyable for all ages. Your rhyming and meter seemed to be right on target as well.
Very good poem. You are right, you can not win here in our contest, because you have wond another trophy. I am sorry for that, but I am proud of you for being honest.
I am sure with poems like this, you will have quite a collection of trophys before too long. Cheryl Good Luck!
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wow, i really liked this alot. I liked how you did the rhyming, and how you flowed the poem. good luck in the contest!
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absolutely beautiful imagery in this poem...i love your words, they seem to be chosen very carefully and your vast vocabulary helps the poem along with ease...excellent job here...good luck in the contest, but with this beauty..i dont think you will need it
kay -
HEALTFELT
This was a magnificent poem. I am astonished with the vocabulary you expressed. I could feel the words come off the page. I only started wriing last month when I found this website.I loves the poem Red Roses. My 16 year old gravdaughter is named, Cassandra Rose so I love to read poems about roses. Take care -
wow!
Wow! This was really, really good. Your vocabulary is obviously quite expansive. I'm impressed in that part. Also, this was very well written. Awesome job here!! -
All I can say is "WOW"...
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wow, i can really feel this piece. your diction is superb... every word fits, is precise and colorful. your imagery shines but doesn't go over the top. this piece is, over-all, extremely well balanced and feels almost effortlessly wise. very professional and well crafted! -alex
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I paint. That's why maybe I somehow related something to this. Such vivid colours of your poem.
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Excellant word choice in this poem!The imagery is wonderful!The background works too!
Thanks for entering,good luck!
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Wow I like it! very well writen, good use of vocabulary, and rhyme too it has everything.
Very good write.
Take care and good luck in the contest
Elaine
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Twisted imagery, excellent vocabulary, all combines for weird descriptiveness. Rhythm and rhyme were well executed as well. I must say the background you chose goes well with the overlying theme. Thank you for entering!
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i'm not sure i understand but it's a really nice poem though
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Yeah it makes sense. Don't worry about how you are writing, just make sure it's from your heart. This was very good, and I enjoyed reading it. Hope you do good in this contest.
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This is a good write I like it... Not entirely sure what to say about it, but it's nice
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