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A Stranger's Love

My heart is still beating so fast,
I can't seem to slow it down,
my heart has been beating like this,
ever since you came to town.

Everyone asked, who's the stranger,
what's his name,where has he bee,
my heart just started pounding,
you looked so handsome walking in.

The moment I looked into your eyes,
I found it hard to breathe,
your eyes seemed to capture my soul,
they made a prisoner of me.

You gave me a smile and took my hand,
you would not let it go,
I prayed you would not notice,
how my heart was beating so.

You held me close,we danced awhile,
you whispered softly in my ear,
all those sweet nothings about me,
no one else could even hear.

When time to leave, you walked me home,
you kissed me goodnight at the door,.
my body started to tremble,
I wanted so much more.

We made love through the night,
he made a woman out of me,
this stranger cane in to my life,
he set my passion free.

His love was gone with the sunrise,
he left as fast as he came
I never will forget him,
the stranger with no name.






 




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Written July 7th, 2004

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  • Bob Fox
    April 6, 2007
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    wow

    A truly fantastic story. Perhaps sprinkled with some truth. amazing


  • Sandygram silver member
    February 8, 2007
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    Thanks Bob for the nice comment. I wrote this 2 weeks after I joined Allpoetry in June 2004. I had never written poetry before. Thank you so much for reading one of my older poems. I so appreciate it. It is always nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    February 22, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I do appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
  • RainbowQueen
    February 21, 2005
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    Fantastic! Much enjoyed write

  • Silent Beauty
    August 4, 2004
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    Wow super mysterious and passion. I love it!! It really made me think. Great write.
    Serena*
  • saz
    July 9, 2004
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    This is such a lovely poem, i like you'r use of description and rhyme. Well done, you truely are a great writer! Saz.

  • Dropp Deadd
    July 7, 2004
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    amazing emotions of how you can fall in love at the first sight...though i don't really believe in that.
  • mrx200417
    July 7, 2004
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    I really love this poem! It's full of great description, and is a really well-written poem. This was just for applauding my poem, but you are a truly gifted poet, and I can't wait to read more of your work.
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