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murder

The violence of that night
uncountable measurements
Death rising in the air
The fresh blood
The cuts
The stabs
The lump in the dirt
The mangled body of a 12 year old girl
corpsy flesh, corpsy new flesh
not a trace
not a trace


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Written July 6th, 2004

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  • July 7, 2004
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    Ooh, this is dark. I hope it's not something about you, but made up. It's quite dark as you must have intended.

    Peace to you,
    AP