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the day you stopped believing

you cried in despair
as you turned away
the day you stopped believing
darkness surrounded you
and you welcomed the cold
the day you stopped believing
prayer seems so vain
for all the angels died
the day you stopped believing
love became hateful
you longed for the pain
the day you stopped believing
i will help you live
so you can see the joy
if i only keep believing...

Author notes

you must find something to believe in or life will be all but pointless.
Written July 6th, 2004

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  • AnotherFace
    July 6, 2004
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    Wow. I can relate to that poem alot. I really do need to find something to believe in, because like you said, Life is pretty pointless rigth now. Anywho, an amazing piece with a wonderful message!