Transvestite, shitting in a phone-booth
"Hey baby, I'll suck your cock for a rock down the block"
Breakfast at Denny's -- Pimps, and whistles -- fat black
whores speaking the walk with red leather purses, swung.
Jung
Tongue
Hung:
But I am not one with the night
I am restless, and perverse
Like crab at Lunar eclipses
And Disco in de-emphasize
I have brass knuckles,
and the will to kill.
Still, I'll probably just
jack some smack in back of
an El-Camino on the way to the
Del Rey Theatre to play Bingo
With Cal Worthington and his
Dog Spot. Because, after all,
"If you need a car, or truck?
Pussy Cow... Pussy Cow,
Pussy Cow, Pussy Cow".
Don't ask me for a cigarette.
Don't ask me for directions
Can't you see?
I'm on a mission.
Author notes
Written July 5th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Street Poems Wanted by leafy.
300 points, ended July 8, 2004, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Yeah, well you are reading a poem from my prostitutes category, no wonder.
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You say my poems don't make sense...Well ok...Look at yours wow with so much cussing and everything...Pretty ridiculous
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I am curious to read more of yourpoem about prostitutes, for some reason I found the idea of having a section entirely devoted to them, really facsinating.
This was good. I liked how it went off on some odd rhymes during the course of the poem.
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ha ha!
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Holy Shit~ This was cool...It had rhythm and rhyme.And was nice and abrasive!Just the way I like it!
Tammy33
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That is great writing- I wont bore you with detail- but beyond the writing, thanks for the public service for quite frankly- another fine machete job in clearing a path through the jungle of prudes in which we all can travel. Be sure to send a forwarding address so we can write to send a 'get well'card for the servere cuts and abrasions you receive. I could write about this world but after this its going to sound as though I am talking about fucking Pleasantville. Always worth a visit- like life is a box of grenades with your writing
David
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hangthejury
makes the streetlights go by a little whoomwhoomwhoom less sharp and the bumps in the road are less rough as they meld more into ethereal awa-coughcoughcough-enings...
sick and stupid eyes translucent flash seeing only never enough and glowing radient with needdeathfuckandwaste...
I sure like your work...
D.
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Thanks for the entry. This is, I guess (as an Englishman) about as raw as American street life comes, a slice of the seamy side, strong on images and pumping action. Vivid poem and the narrative character, true to the piece.
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the shit? lol...this was a very interesting poem...just like all the others that i've read from you...yeah...keep up the good writing!
peace, love, rock n' roll!!!
Shana
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I'll place this in the erotic catagory if you place your bumm in the freezer, deal?
What was erotic about it? The Denny's, or the shit? -
dude...can i bum a smoke?
excellent write...soooo...would you please put it in the erotica category????????????????????????????????
what sort of rusty nipple cramp suggests categories for the poems of others? could this person possibly be a poet?
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i like the shape to it, it has the form of a female figure.
interesting perspective i suppose. but then , you always did think strangely.
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A man on a mission.. well.. sometimes.. I don't get it all.. but mission statements.. I generally do.. so you just keep on Fruedian slippin' with a collective Carl and some sheer bloody nekkidness thrown in for good measure.. and I'll keep reading..
~GILL~xxxx -
Expressed well
Hmmm.. you have captured atmosphere with this.. the reason i like it is because it's so unique... there really is a street feel to it. Good luck in the contest, there is something intriguing about this write -
Please place this piece in the erotica category.
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yea, DUDE... an expression...(????). yea, so, DUDE, i thought ur poem... was really cool- the way u wrote it- i was actually crackin up, good luck in da contest,
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Dude...
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dude, this is well....wow.....i have had to read this a few times, and I'm still trippin'.....i think i see your point though....love 'em, and leave 'em, right?.....maybe, not sure though....good luck in the contest.......this is cool ~~~~~~~~~Stephanie~~~~~~~~
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