Bright morning sunlight
Making you feel so alive,
Breath in happiness
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Written May 24th, 2002
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Nice spring haiku.
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Refreshing
This is wonderful! To feel the warm glow of the morning light upon my skin is so refreshing. This poem expresses it well. Great Write!! -
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a found this haiku to be very peacful
............soothing.........
thanx for sharing!! *** -
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air is chi it's good
if we are wise and do not
mentally pollute
;]
~ i b -
excellent
Beautifully done ...
beautiful sunlight
shimmering life dancing glee
happiness breathes beams
Love
Myra -
excellent
very nice
well done
~*~adriana~*~ -
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ever so beautiful.....
i love haikus --they are my favorite..... -
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that's pretty refreshing -
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another lovely write.
:0)
Nam -
excellent
inhale
exhale
smile
:) -
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Ahh almost gave me spring fever, and tonight I need it. Thank you. -
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nicely done.. forgot my sunglasses
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