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I Met Him

My life has changed in so many ways, both big and small.
I've conquered things others have not.
I'm not like everyone else.

My boyfriend asked me to go to church. Me, church? Psh.
I did though, so I could focus on him, and no one else.
Big mistake.

I went on like that for two months. Everything bored me.
He wanted me to volunteer at Vacation Bible School. I did.
When the little four years old found Him, this thirteen year old did.

I cried. My life changed so much in a matter of five minutes.
I didn't think just knowing Him would mold my life.
I didn't think a man had those kind of powers.

But this man was different. He was incredible.

This man was Jesus.

My life is happier, and much more fun.
No more crazy nights doing bad things.
I get tempted, and I just pray.

Jesus, this man, changed my life.

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It's not the best. Sorry...
Written July 5th, 2004

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  • Just Rachael
    July 14, 2004
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    I'm so glad for you and share in your joy at the amazing, changing effect He has on you life! Thank you for sharing this story!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    July 10, 2004
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    It does make your life easier if you have faith in it. I'm glad you have found something to hold onto. Good luck in the contest.

    ~whisper


  • Dropp Deadd
    July 10, 2004
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    aw...i'm not sure to understand where and why and when you mewt jesus and how you met him in only 5 minutes but good style though

  • kittyom
    July 9, 2004
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    you have written something very close to my heart.....this is amazing....a beautiful sentiment......nice work, and good luck in the contest........ ~~~~~~~~~~~Stephanie~~~~~~~~~

  • xearinex
    July 5, 2004
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    true he works in crazy ways. great write keep it up. thanks for sharing. EaRiNe!!!!

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