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I Want To Know...

I want to know why...

I do these things every day,
Typical and plain in every way.

I feel no difference, I see no change,
There's something missing in my soul,
I have this void, you see, I've tried so hard to fill it,
With every effort I make, my heart becomes a bigger hole.

What can I do, this I do not know,
My problem seems to be unsolvable.

I want to do this and that, but I don't,
Because I know, deep down, those things are wrong,
None of the above options will solve my problem,
What is it that will change my feelings and views?

I want to know...

Author notes

Yea, it's diffrent from my normal style, feel free to tell me what you think.
Written July 5th, 2004

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  • suicidaldream05
    July 6, 2004
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    I love it! It's very good and heartfelt. I know how you feel, hon, and I know exactly what you're talking about. You know I'm always here when you need me. I love you a lot, you're the most beautiful girl I know, inside and out. I don't know what the hell I'd do without you. I LOVE YOU!

    Be true to yourself

    <3,
    Alison

  • Laurie
    July 5, 2004
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    Sometimes I feel this way too, it is a difficult feeling to analyze and can sometimes make you feel very desperate Good job
    God bless