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Untitled-1

The silvery crescent
beaming with compassion ,
first gold of dawn
thwarting the black terror ,
gushing rivers
singing a saga of sanctity-
a saga that could humble
all manifestations,
Then, why stand petrified
by the fire lit by yourself?
a self flourish of ambiguities
& repine,
If discern the other side of darkness ,
you lay ablaze in ethereal incandescence
The hieroglyphs of creators rescue…

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Written July 4th, 2004

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  • madhavmool
    August 22, 2004
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    curiousity with own feelings.

    Untitled-1 by Apurva is a mysterious poem at the first sight, but if view intirely it signifies curiousity within the poetess which made this poem. She tried to enquire with herself composing this poem.


  • eternalpoet
    August 6, 2004
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    3 stars ***

    this is nice write APURVA... never read such type of work before... the selection of words makes this poem more interesting to me.. ienjoyed it completely... take cares and have a nice time my friend... just keep it up dear... your humble little friend... ... ... .... - vic


  • Ladybug
    July 5, 2004
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    wow, this is really kwel, could you shorten it just a little bit and enter it on my add a line song called
    Ball Of Fire????

    thankx
    Tamara

  • a u r a
    July 5, 2004
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    applaudable

    Another most enjoyable write- I marvel your mastery with words that create the most magnificient imageries-