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Joy

Joy is depression depressed.

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Written July 4th, 2004

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  • LilyRose
    July 23

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    Superbly written in simplicity one can understand and reflect upon with a feeling of happiness and hope


  • 2lullabyhaven
    September 19, 2008

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    I had to do a double-take on this one, thanks for making me pause and good luck to you in my contest lol


  • unavailable
    September 13, 2008
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    cute


  • neon nightmares
    June 25, 2008

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    hey i love this. depression being depressed. lol.
    anyway, thanks for entering and good luck
    linzi
    =D


  • Silenced one
    July 11, 2004
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    Neat way of thiking about joy. I think you just made my head spin a little. Now you see what you started. I am going to be thinking about that all night, good luck in the contest.

    Sarah


  • LonelyTears07
    July 5, 2004
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    I liked how you kind of had to think about what was being said. I sat back for a little bit and just thought abotu it. It all became clear after that. Kinda like what ragtagthoguhts said, there is a sorta play on words here. I like that. Good luck in my contest!!!

    *Mary*


  • wheezyanna
    July 4, 2004
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    I like this statement. Makes you think. Made me think of -
    Freedom is suppression suppressed. Good luck in the contest.

  • ragtagthoughts
    July 4, 2004
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    I love the use of the words here. Most people don't used depressed in that fashion often and so it reads almost like a play on words. So true that it seems most people default emotion is depression.


  • shastadaisey123
    July 4, 2004
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    so true...good luck in the contest...freda

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