feelings of the unknown
just not feeling myself
unappreciated, manipulated, unforgiven
friends love me and want the best
but they dont know how
to deal with a slut like me
feelings of betrayal
friend of 14 years ~ trust them?
you'd think so, so did i
but they told another friend
something that was supposed to be kept secret
how am i supposed to feel?
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Written June 30th, 2004
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discardedtears on Jul 03, 5:05 p.m.
Trapped in a Sea of Endless Pain.....Release Me! 35 critiques, 2 poems. said:
Verdict: Great
I agree betrayal by your friends hurts.
Betrayal, it's such a powerful emotion. Especially from close friends, you end up hurt and the ruining of a friendship may be in the works . Great poem. -
who said anything about getting drunk?
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interesting
Nice piece. My question is of the sluttiness? If you see your self as a slut, and others see you as a slut, then quit being a slut. Its simple as aperson who wants to stop drinking. Try to stop getting drunk, and you be something better.
Be your self.
Nice work
-scotty -
Personal poem, and well written - better to write down the thoughts you think rather than bottle them up inside.
Nice job! -
Great
Betrayal, it's such a powerful emotion. Especially from close friends, you end up hurt and the ruining of a friendship may be in the works . Great poem.
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