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Little Girl

look little girl look
you don't see him, he sees you
hide little girl hide
no hes there too
wait little girl wait
hes coming for you
run little girl run
hes on your track
call little girl call
no one is listening
defense little girl defense
you can't beat him
keep running little girl! keep running!
hes coming faster and faster
HIDE LITTLE GIRL HIDE!
Hes coming to find you...
....end it little girl...end it
NO! FIGHT LITTLE GIRL! FIGHT!
end it little girl, end it
FIGHT IT!
END IT!
FIGHT IT!
END IT!
FIGHT IT!
END IT!
rest little girl, rest
in your tomb
with your name
mental anxiety, paranoia
death, was coming for you

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Written July 2nd, 2004

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  • Tearsbroken
    July 27, 2004
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    Awesome poem. I liked reading it. It had alot of emotion and great flow. it kinda slapped me in the face and made me listen. I loved it keep writting.
    luv
    JessJess

  • xBrokenHeartx
    July 26, 2004
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    Awesome this poem was so DAMN good very interesting and intense i dont think ive really read this style of poetry before but i think your poetry style is great your flow was great till some point where something broke it but anyways great poem i liked it lots

    PsychoFreak


  • xHiddenHeartsx
    July 14, 2004
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    Thank you, Im giong to check out your poetry, i bet your a great writer as well


  • starzbabe621
    July 13, 2004
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    Great

    Wow.. that was really intense. I read it and my heart actually sped up. I really like it! You are a great writer from what I've seen thus far. Keep on writing....


  • DimishedFaith
    July 9, 2004
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    Very well donepoem stronge words stronge emotion very nicly written.
    DimishedFAith


  • July 3, 2004
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    Twists and turns. May your heart be comforted instead of dark. May your mind be soothed instead of disturbed. I hope those are the right words. May everything look up instead of down. AP

  • Miserable
    July 2, 2004
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    brillent

    omg this is really a good poem i thought it had a diferent ending but it didnt it was a surprise its full of twist i mlove it well done!


  • July 2, 2004
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    Very Good

    very....interesting...honestly the style is very interesting as is the poem itself...very good....just kinda freaky lol...the end seems a little off, the mental anxiety or something breaks the flow...other then that vreat job!

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