The sun fades away
losing all light
breath by breath
taking all life
killing you slowley
hurting you more
making you bleed
keeping you sore
You took my soul
kept it in a box
had it hidden
left it locked
you tryed to control me
you thought it would work
but now im back
hideing the hurt
I cant let you win
you've won too many times
this time i cant cry
ive cryed too many times
but now im ready
prepared for the fight
you've got your sword
ive got my knife
im not scared of you
no matter what you do
because i can win
and im going to
this time its my turn
and you cant hurt me now
my heart is covered
my soul is blocked
im ready to heal
now im out of your box
the sun fades away
losing all light
breath by breath
taking all life
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Written July 2nd, 2004
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this poem is really kewlies me can relate to it alot well thanks for ur comment anyways
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awesome
really great write, lotsa emotion, good job! -
this poem freakin ROCKS!!! that is so rad!!! good job.
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hey thanx im really glad u like it...i was suprised cus i was sitting watching tv talking to friends on ms and it just came out but thanx im glad u enjoyed it!
alisa -
This is a really awesome poem, I love the flow and the overall feel of your poetry. My favorite part was:
You took my soul
kept it in a box
had it hidden
left it locked
Those are really powerful words, well done!
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