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Day by day

day by day
night by night
i wish i lived a differant life

i wish i may
i wish i might
i wish tonight was my last night

i hope tomorrow i never wake
i hope i get away
from all the pains and aches

I see
i bleed
i feel
i need

i cry at night thinking all about life

i sit alone
in a house called my home
wondering why i feel so alone

my heart is cold
my fingers numb
i wish i had someone to love
the day fades away
the sky fills with stars
i look on my arm seeing scars

day by day
night by night
i wish i lived a differant life

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Written July 2nd, 2004

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  • AnGeLoFdEaTh
    July 23, 2004
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    awesome

    awesome! are these personal experiences??