desiccated land
with weathered wrinkles creased
embraces rain
Patricia Gibson-Williams
Author notes
Written June 22nd, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku haiku haiku haiku! by FifthDove.
300 points, ended July 4, 2004, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Could clearly envison this one
A beautiful haiku
Good luck in the contest
Huggles
Susan~~~
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Oh what an awesome description!!
Your ku took my breath away....and thirst
Lovely lovely job
Good luck
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Very nicely done.
I could see the rain begin
and the earth gasping at every drop.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
FifthDove -
Oh wow this one was awesome.. it just made me immediately picture some kind of dried out barren wasteland. I like this one a lot, and I think the last line fits perfectly.
Good luck in the contest! And thanks for the comments on my haikus as well
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I am in a haiku mood right now and this one is great!
It even makes me feel thirsty, well done. -
a great little haiku,
gave a stunning picture and left no doubt in my mind of what you were describing,
it takes talent to write a haiku like that
take care
lisa x -
Ah i can relate! With Country NSW in drought at the moment this is very relevant for me. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest!
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