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A Letter. [unfinished]

Do you remember the cold dew basking on the vibrant green shoots of grass? Tell me, do you really? I can hardly recall the comfort of your hand upon mine in those passing moments. Your sparkling eyes seemed to speak for everything in the world. The thoughts that sprinted through my head so freely now seem a galaxy away. Do you remember the passion in those moments, or did you choose to savor the feeling of sand beneath us instead?

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Written July 1st, 2004

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  • Ee
    February 4, 2005
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    very pretty - nikki