There it is.
The sweet melody of love.
Can you hear it?
For it is surely plain to see.
the look in your eyes.
the way we touch.
The smile in our hearts.
the joy in our lives.
For we are together.
Is there something I have missed?
I think not.
Otherwise you would not be
here with me.
For love overwhelms us.
Let's enjoy it!
March 24, 1982
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what can i say? this hit me in a way that no poem i have read in a long time hit me. the sweet melody of love is indeed a beautiful thing. my praise and blessings. much love.
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I always like to read your earlier poems Bill,there is always so much feeling in them, keep brining them out my friend, they are beautiful~Joan
where've you been buddy?
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man, this was an expertly worded ray of ultra violet.... it's plain hearted emotion was beautiful, and refreshing.....
perhaps I should have dated all my older stuff too... man, 'cause some of the stuff I wrote when I was 18 pales to where I am now...
You are indeed a writer, for you know words, and how to use them economically if need be, which of course is on display here.... on your bio it said something about a poet with peace in his soul... that describes me as well...
no longer do oceans of emotion batter me, I stand center and flexible, able to dip into any pool of personality I wish... have you found that this has exponentially improved your writing also, if you are indeed a poet with peace in his soul?
well, enough verbal wandering, time to check out more of your prose, Mr. Sidewinder.
much love,
mike porkchops, over and out there....
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