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If The Time Is Right

There you are playing your pinball
I walk by the jutebox
looking for the right mood
So I play a sweet love song
you're listening
I walk up to you and ask you to dance
you smile and say yes
so the night begins.
What do you think?
Are you in the mood for love?
I hope so,
It's what I need.
So let me kiss you.
no...
I won't hurry.
It's not my style.
It's a slow love.
I'm gentle if the time is right.
but if you're wanting a lover...
I'm here.
And if you want someone who cares...
I'm here.
And if you just want someone to talk to.
I'll talk.
So maybe if the time is right...
love begins,
It's up to you.
Shall I love you?

May 16, 1982

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Written July 1st, 2004

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  • Ember Rose
    July 15, 2004
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    All I can say is Wow!!! Where are guys like U when a girl really needs one? You have a way of capturing a style of all the romantic stories we have been grown up on. Shoot. She's one lucky gal. Gotta love ya!!!! Rose
    Edited on Jul 15, 2:05 because ''Cause there had to be a P. S.'.


  • Ladybug
    July 1, 2004
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    oh this is a treasure then and now, you do have such a sweet heart and I could feel you compassion here at loud.
    a beauty enticing piece

    Tamara