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As You Walked By

Somehow I lost my breath
as you walked by,
for your beauty had enchanted me,
what words never could say
lies in your wondrous grace,
If I could only hold you
my fantasy would last forever
but that only you could say
for you're the keeper
of the lock to my heart
but if you can unlock it
i would be beholding to you
because it would change my life.
Would you dare to take that chance?

march 23, 1982

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Written July 1st, 2004

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