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Wandering In Awe

Wandering In Awe:




Red squirrels in old Scots pines,
Rutting deer on the mountains,
Fresh running natural spring waters,
Feeding, Mother Natures fountains.

Eagles soaring in a clear blue sky,
Salmon leaping in fast flowing rivers,
Beasts grazing in the grassy glens,
Aye Scotland has so much, to give us.

Scotland’s hills of purple, green and brown,
Of bracken, gorse and heather,
An open loch stretching down,
Looks good to me, in any weather.

© ali-p 2004

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Written June 30th, 2004

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  • ISpeakForTheTrees
    March 10, 2005
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    oh, thank you. what a wunderbar way to start my day! another trip! Thanks for sharing-I Loved it!


  • poetryality silver member
    July 5, 2004
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    Thank you so much for these visuals. The imagery is wondrous. The scenery amazing. This poem is so very descriptive and allows me to journey into your wondeful world. Thank you for the time spent to write this beautiful poem and enter it in my contest. The very best of luck to you in all that you do.

    Much Love,
    Renee


  • Touchof1der silver member
    July 2, 2004
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    I love the beauty and the imagery of your words...I just wish they were on a brighter background more befitting of the wonderful images your words create. Great job! Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.