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Undertaking

We can all see you
See who you are and what you do
Broadcasted for the world to see
And you are fearless

Your anger is overpowering
Like a bloody ocean everyone is drowning in
You work so hard to do these things
Your blood, your sweat

You have turned your back on everyone
You would kill your own brother to get to the top
Hearing your name commands attention
And everyone is watching you

People have all been hurt
And you know how do deal out the pain
Words you say could kill
Your hands could rip out my throat

You don't know what a gentle touch is
You're barely human
The closest thing to death we'll ever see
Even gods run from your name

Undertaker, you're my hero

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Written June 30th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • Lady Silver Dragon
    July 2, 2004
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    Yes, whoa. But good nonetheless... and I'll say what I've been saying, it IS the Undertaker, can't go better than that!


  • Shadow Kitsune
    July 2, 2004
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    Whoa, very good. Thanks much for entering. ^^

  • shakeshake
    June 30, 2004
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    Interesting. An arrow through my skull.