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Wagananupa~Great Mountain...



I know the hills of your birth,
my friend; I've swam the waters there.
  My feet have walked her solid ground
and my tongue does taste Her air...

These trees I see not quite the same
as their mothers which you knew-
  They as well can feel the burn,
of this sickness
named  saldu  ...                     


See, 'Savagery', the English claim-
Is all which others are.
Though all I see behind them
are wounds left, near and far...

People free and people kind-
left withered in decay;
For sake of all you made your mind,
Strong one hear me pray...

Our sun which warms me,
grown cold without your face...
Your people gone, unreconciled;
I hang mine in disgrace...

No dreams or hopes or even fears
can beat this demon greed;
though kindness is not fortitude,
would these words you need?

Stand here now upon her peaks-
look down with me today;
Sad, we see, their betterments reek
as life they toss away.                   

Brother Ishi, I know not your given name-
and am unworthy of thus by far;
I am humbled in my heart, for indeed
a man you are...

Determined, soul-sick and weak-
face all which is to be, held fast;
knowing after forty years,
Yahi people will just not last...   

How was it for you to discover alone-
and to find how your path would wander?
Did you see it in your mothers eyes...
what alternatives did you ponder?

As you ceremoniously burnt your hair                        (gone)
and the last wild ashes drown-
You must have somehow known enough
that truth's a thorny crown...

Lift your eyes now, and see-
the blue in skies beyond...
Hear Brother Eagle call to you-
fishing at your pond!

Mother Earth has plenty, I see-
for each again as All;
Coyote even knows his place-
as Summer before Fall...

Daha, river, sister true-
carry us, please, to peace;
Waganupa  calls my brother home,
give his soul release...

...









    I wish to tell you of this land-
      I've always called my home;
      Grand and Strong and Wonderful
 
      rich histories to comb...



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Written June 30th, 2004

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  • MissHapps
    July 9, 2004
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    Thank you! Very kind indeed... I feel the oppossite holds true as that I would be lost without these great peoples...


  • MissHapps
    July 9, 2004
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    Forgive the time this has taken me... I am honored to have been chosen. I wasn't able to give you what I had originally hoped for and this seemed to fall short in many ways. Yet that is how it feels on a whole, really...
    If I had a bow your head in thanksrespectsadnesshonorandkind smiley... here she would be ... Thank you for your very kind and heartwarming words, macandrew... Coming from you I know I must be doing something right! ...Right?!?
    Peace
    Deena


  • macandrew
    July 3, 2004
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    wonderful

    A lot of the reading I have done on Ishi comes from Saxton Pope, a good friend and hunting partner of Ishi's. Your poem had the feel of brotherhood to it. It reminded me of their trip back to Ishi's home.

    A very smooth and pleasurable poem to read.
    Well done.
    John


  • poetryality silver member
    July 3, 2004
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    CONGRATULATIONS!!! This is a wondrous poem and tribute to a nation of people who would be lost without writings such as this!


  • MissHapps
    July 1, 2004
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    Thank you for your comment, Ann... Yeah, I've been pretty much all through the hills of California. Her deserts, her grasslands and the wonders between... Sad to see so much of it dissapating.
    Deena


  • AnnD Moderators member
    June 30, 2004
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    A wonderful poem and what a good entry for the contest.
    I love the feel of walking in his shoes...
    Well done and good luck in the contest.
    Ann


  • Smilingspider
    June 30, 2004
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    This is a wonderful, very well written poem.

    Good luck.

    Jules


  • June 30, 2004
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    this is very good. i like it alot. nice job. keep up the good work.

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