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I Used To Be A Frungle

I Used To Be A Frungle



Do you ever look at yourself in the mirror
and get a shock at what you see
perhaps you are a frungle
i know because it's happened to me

A frungle seems to be out of date
no matter what they wear
with a hairstyle that looks as though
they've had a real good scare

One frungle seems to attract another
so my friend take a good look around
are all those men chasing you
Prince Charming's or are they clowns

It's never too late to change yourself
being a frungle can be a thing of the past
and the next time you see a poor frungle
you can point and have a good laugh

I've changed my image and now i'm proud
as i've been told that i'm a beauty
you too can join me walking down the street
when the men shout what a wooty


~~~

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Written June 30th, 2004

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  • Temujin
    March 17, 2007

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    ha, this is very nice, very sweet. very nice rhythm and flow. at least the nazis gave you a silver cup for your troubles.


  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    December 1, 2004
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    A frungle? A frungle? I hope I'm not one! This was a very good poem, highly amusing. Nice to have a humour break from all the seriousness of the world.


  • LadyStarlight
    July 11, 2004
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    Thank you so much for awarding me a silver trophy and for the points I'm thrilled, this was such a great contest and you had so many great entries

    Blessings and Smiles

    ~LadyStarlight~


  • Airtightchick
    July 9, 2004
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    Haha that was sooo fun- I like it a lot.


  • Jillosophy
    July 2, 2004
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    Frungle, frumpy pringles? Very cute. Would prefer to be a red hot wooty meself! Woot, woot!


  • PyrricVictory
    July 2, 2004
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    pretty cool idea and I usually don't care for rhyming poems, but this one had flow and rhythym. Good job and good luck!


  • Ladybug
    June 30, 2004
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    this is cute, all the way around!
    good luck even though I think you have aced it already, LOL


    Tamara


  • DarlingDeath
    June 30, 2004
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    Great poem. It kinda describes Mimi on the Drew Carrey show, yes? lol. good job, definitely made me laugh. good luck.
    ~ lost love


  • June 30, 2004
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    My friends and i have been creating words for the past couple days so it gave me this idea. Glad you enjoyed
    *~OD~*


  • LadyStarlight
    June 30, 2004
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    LOL.. thanks a lot, i had great fun with this Wonderful idea for a contest

    Blessings and Smiles

    ~LadyStarlight~


  • June 30, 2004
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    what a wOOty :D

    Lmao... last line... what a wooty . that's great. Thank you for entering hun and good luck.
    *~OD~*

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