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To Caroline

Of all earthly paradise the mind recalls
Of all fair and eloquent fancies
Of it all, I think, I find myself
Fleeting back to one delight

Oh Caroline! When I glance into your bright green eyes
And look away, out of off base timidity
And feel your body’s heat and tremor with mind own
Then, only then, are my desires quenched

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Written when I was lovesick.
Written July 4th, 2002

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  • eternalpoet
    July 8, 2004
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    5 stars *****

    hey cory.. hi... this was fantastic poem buddy...your selection of words is awesome.... i , fortunately clicked on this poem...i havnt read any of your works before...except your page... this is really wonderful poem... just keep it up my friend.... and take cares.. and have a nice time....your humble little friend... ... ... - vic