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Daddy was my hero

daddy was my hero
and i loved him so so much
he called me his baby girl and his little pumpkin
i was his angel that no one could touch
no one could touch but him

i didnt understand why we did stuff at night
but i thought it was normal
it was ok and alright

how can a dad do that to his kid
to somebody with his own blood
but i had to do exactly what he said
and keep it a secret
or i was sure to get hit
he was scarry when he was mad
and if i didnt obey, everything got bad

i just dont understand how you could do that to your daughter
to someone who loved you so  much
now im older and i think about it
i relize how wrong it really was

so for people who like to screw their kids
or touch them in any way
fuck you i hope you burn in hell
becuase thats where you deserve to stay

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Written June 29th, 2004

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  • AnGeLoFdEaTh
    July 23, 2004
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    excellent

    great write, lotsa strong feelings, hope this isnt real!! awesome! *beth*

  • xoAngelFreakox
    June 29, 2004
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    wow this was a really strong poem...really...i hope this really didnt happen to u cuz this is really bad....and if is then i hope it is over..abuse of ne kind is just awful exesially if it is from family...well that was a really good poem and i hope you write more...*Dori*


  • June 29, 2004
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    very good

    I just read this poem woooh yes very very good and abuse is bad but I can relate cuz I had a similar situation go on in my life not with my dad but another member of my family. *hugs*