Love shows no boundaries nor mercy.
You can't help who you fall in love with.
They could be tall or short, brown eyed or blue eyed.
Love is something that only God above controls.
Sometimes you get hurt in this silly process.
Sometimes you discover the man of your dreams.
This person, who you spend every waking hour thinking about,
and every sleeping moment dreaming about.
When you find this person, you'll stop at nothing to be with or talk to them.
When everything around you makes you think of how much you like a person, well...that's when you know it's love.
No distance or time can stop it. Love always finds a way.
Author notes
Andrew, this is for you.
Written June 29th, 2004
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In your title, it should read: Love Always Finds A Way
Your ideas seem to jump around a lot and you dont seem to have complete thoughts in the first group of lines. You say, "Love shows no boundaries nor mercy." Which is a good line, but you dont explain why this is so. You skip to a new thought and then attempt a short explination and then state simply, that God controls who you love... He might Guide you, Or Influence you (by your belief in Him) But, He does not control you. If He could control us or our thoughts, everyone would believe in Him and our world would not currently be on a one way trip to hell.
Also, you said in your authors comments that this was for a particular Andrew, but it does not seem like it was written for him. It seems that you wrote a general attempt, and then decided it was for this person as an afterthought.
If you organize your ideas, I think you may be able to make this piece readable.
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Aw, this is sweet. And you're right, it does find a way. You might have to go through a lot, but it'll be there. Nice write
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