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you

I can feel your kiss lying on my chapped lips, waiting
patiently for the tears to stop.
Then seeping into my soul
dancing over each curve of my body
making me forget my pain.

I can sense your touch though you’re not with me, now
you surround me in my mind
Arms around my shivering body
pulling me closer with each sob
letting me finally fall asleep.

I can hear your voice though it’s fainter now, calling
out to me from where you are.
Whispering promises of forever
quieting my insecurities
helping me breathe deeply again.

I can’t see your face and that’s what kills me, pictures
can’t satisfy my longing.
The hollow in my stomach growing
emptier and lonelier every minute
until I’m with you again.

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Written June 28th, 2004

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  • Brokenheart89
    June 28, 2004
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    wow this was so beautiful and so true! I know this feeling and its so hard to stop crying once youve started rite? Missing someone is so hard and painful, well beautiful write and I hope that the pain goes away
    <3 Sam