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Swim the Touch (for Olivia)

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I saw a butterfly
Naked to the beautiful eye
But it was on the sidewalk, walking
Trying to be human, I sigh

 

I bowed down to smell
Her roses in summer swell
And saw someone had walked away
Happy at burning her wings to hell

 

God painted her wings
Innocence died in cruel sting
But for pitiless eyes death is walking
Ill smoke rising from the cig butt he did sling

 

The walking stopped, trembling in pain,
Locked in the future from the past
Cannot be the right way to live, but
This is inevitable

 

Why me?

 

I flew for you.

 

I simply landed on the flowers of fate for you, you

 

Slept on and then stepped on and then screwed by you

 


Intoxicating in its sadness
I yield to the setting sun in the poem called Passing.
Maybe, just maybe, this too shall pass…
Peace through love

 

So kiss the wings and let me die,
For it will be the only kiss I always get right.
The Goodbye Kiss, I’ve only come to say what I say,
And if I fail, my lessons unlearned close in on my purpose.

 

Destiny and time the enemy~
I see the universal tongue moving,
Through you through him through me,
I knew the poem before you imagined it.

 

Recreating the walls and the halls of perception
A self-made dangerous game
We carry on their memories
Like a foreshadowing pastime.

 

First God throws a pebble
Then throws a brick
I took the bricks
And built my house

 

Conjunction!
One star sang of the other stars’ beauty!
We exhaled exquisite galaxies like fireworks,
Piercing icy spaces in lonely places.

 

As your ballet fingers danced
Upon my youthful psyche
My innocence is reborn in recall
My virgin words blazed in your moaning embrace.

 

Each planetary orbit a learning curve
Pulling our tides to rip from our eyes deep oceans
This you gave me at your untimely grave,
The tears nourishing dying roses.

 

‘Not meant to be’?
Was it a...a lie?
There’s no such thing as luck,
Only decisions and consequences.  So dry.

 

Oh

 

Nom

 

A

 

To

 

Poe

 

ia

 


Your name splashes in my mind
Your frame gushes like fine rhyme
Your lips below buzz until it is time
Your rapturous poetic echoes comb away locks of long ago.

 

How little did I know that
All the corners we painted ourselves into
Were synthetic, like scabs to the intellect.
Random lessons seems endless and unbalanced

 

Arbitrary thatch, but what did we FEEL beneath me?
But you.

To steal a truth…
When the student is ready,
The teacher pierces the night sky.

 

Lost & Found need each other.
Indeed, the Search Engine of you Soul
Never sleeps
Sometimes weeps
And I distain as trite to say, ‘prays’ for keeps.

 

We find only what we are.

 

Might I ever find you again
For the first time
Reel my lips in until I’m speechless.

Swim the touch

Author notes

I relate to the learning curves of lovliness.  I attempted to write this as if I were Olivia, yet with my perspective.
Written June 28th, 2004

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  • raggyann
    December 27, 2007

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    i realy think this would make a great song
    i liked so much about this write ithat it would take days to tell you all of them
    great work to a fine poet


    • Timothy Cameron gold member
      December 27, 2007
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      You are appreciated...thank you. Wish more people liked my poetry. I'll get there some day (I hope).


    • Timothy Cameron gold member
      December 27, 2007
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      It never occured to me this could be a song (I see part of it might...wow!). Thank you!


  • theGazzelle
    March 14, 2006
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    Onomatopoeia . . every time I see ya! (snork! blub!)


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    November 23, 2004
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    Olivia is a gifted soul. Thank you. It was my honor to write this poem for her.


  • Axelle Black
    November 23, 2004
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    oooooo, this is an awesome write! I love what Olivia does, and I guess this really did reflect parts of her. I'm glad you took time to write this... I'm sure she's extremely happy to have someone caring for her (if only I'd had the time...stupid exams). But this took my breath away, honestly. Great great job with this!


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    November 20, 2004
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    Don't give up on me...I'm far from perfect but I genuinly care about people. For some reason, I took a real shining to you. Maybe it seems like we struggled with some of the same problems.


  • pulsating
    November 20, 2004
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    yes this does tell the story very well.

  • the blinding Son
    October 5, 2004
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    this trully took my breath away and aparently other readers to. this is so well deserving of a good job. hope to see new work soon!


  • myrataal silver member
    July 6, 2004
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    Masterful

    Dearest Poet

    This masterful write combined beauty and truth in such a way that it left me yearning for more ... A wonderful poem, filled with breathtakingly beautiful phrases, linked to form a gracious whole.

    Thank you.

    Myra


  • wendy
    July 3, 2004
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    Life can be such a torturous fate. We see beauty in things where man do indeed destroy. It becomes their happiness. They seek to be sadistic where we seek to become solitude. We are the in-between. Let's just be non-judgemental for a while. It may help embrace our sanity.


  • July 3, 2004
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    This is really fantastic. I like Olivia. You have done an amazing job here very well done.


  • maryannde gold member
    July 2, 2004
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    it's been a long time since I came to listen to your words. And I do mean listen, there is no other way to read your poetry. One HAS to read aloud, and yes...more than once.

    Where to start with something as amazing as this. So many beautiful lines, wordings, but this one I like a great deal...

    "We exhaled exquisite galaxies like fireworks,
    Piercing icy spaces in lonely places."

    and even the "Oh...nomAToPoeia." I love the romantic notion of a name being a sound.

    Last lines are perfect..but so is the entire poem.

    "Reel my lips in until I’m speechless.

    Swim the touch"

    Loved this poem very much... Very nice work.

    My best to you...hope you are well.
    Mary ann






  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    July 2, 2004
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    a masterpiece~

    Very imaginative and unique
    I liked this one a lot
    I am like Poetryreality
    This poem is indeed a masterpice
    Good luck in the contest
    I got up some new ones too cough *hint,hint,
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~


    Edited on Jul 02, 1:11 because 'error'.


  • -LizBTropez-
    July 1, 2004
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    Spectacular

    Wow, at the second line I knew this would be good. I liked the odd rhyme scheme, and weird ways of saying things... beautiful imagery and flow, and excellent wording, especially when one phrase leads logically into another. Thought provoking, and imaginative. Simply a work of genius. (psst, there's an extra a before lie).


  • Runawaytrain
    June 30, 2004
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    So much to absorb in this. An absolutly amazing read. The beginning made me think of Frost's poem Design:

    I found a dimpled spider, fat and white,
    On a white heal-all, holding up a moth
    Like a white piece of rigid satin cloth--
    Assorted characters of death and blight
    Mixed ready to begin the morning right,
    Like the ingredients of a witches' broth--
    A snow-drop spider, a flower like a froth,
    And dead wings carried like a paper kite.

    But it went on to encompass soooo much more. This line in itself is brilliant:

    Lost & Found need each other.

    The whole poem is a masterpiece.


  • g r e y i s m
    June 28, 2004
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    you did great with this little project...I am very glad you entered.
    best wishes..
    ~ O

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