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Inspirations of Sector-Hunter

Happiness
A strong friendship
Light O' Love

Romantic
Sexual Love
Seduction

Devotion
Pure puppy love
Kiss of Peace

Infatuation
To treasure and cherish
It's you I hold dear
Physical Attraction

Beautiful kisses
Tied in a lover's knot
Warmth of your smile
Passion lingers always

Express ones true self
Sexual desire
Heavenly eyes shine
Inner thoughts to convey

Affectionately
I will always love you
There is no other
Express my true feelings

Souls as One
Caressive Fondness
To intrigue you

To fall in love
No restrictions
I Love You
A love song
Your touch feel sweet
Love token

My heart beats for you forever strong

Author notes

This is another homework assignment. We had to write a poem in a form called Nibor. This form was made up by Sector-Hunter!
The picture is one my dad drew. He passed away in October. I have very few pieces of sentimetal objects of him. This being one of them!
Written June 28th, 2004

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  • HammeR
    July 14, 2004
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    Neat write, I have never used or saw this form before. So today my quest is complete as I have learned something once again. You use alot of very beautiful words to describe your father in this write. It was very lovely, thanx for sharing and take care.
    P.S. Hurry back!


  • queen Moderators member
    June 28, 2004
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    This is pretty cool, I love this background. This is an interesting form also. I love it. Queen


  • Chrissy Lee
    June 28, 2004
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    Thanks....but I have to give all props to Sector-Hunter!

    Chrissy Lee


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    June 28, 2004
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    This was a very sweet poem I cant help with what is wrong becasue it is for class but I enjoyed the poem great work and thanks for the pormo in your comment lots of love Robin...aka SH


  • leo2
    June 28, 2004
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    I'm not familiar with this form but I kind of like it. Short little descriptions in each verse. And the subject of course is one very dear to my heart.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

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