I never want another,
your love is like no other
I thought I was your man,
I thought you were my lady
So when it comes fallin down
Why did you act so shady!
Tell me why.....
Why did you betray me,
I thought you were my lady
Why did you have to go..
go walking out that door
Why did you have to leave me
Why did you break a bond so true
Break a love that was so strong!
I know one day,
you'll be back around.
To break my heart in two
to play me like a fool!
Then you will say....
BABY I'M SORRY,
FOR ALL THE THINGS I'VE DONE!
All the times I played you
Yet, I knew you were the one!
Honey I know that
things won't be the same.
So tell me Why....
Why do you still feel the same,
after all the shit I put you through
Why would you still love me,
when I didn't feel the same for you
Why would you still be with me,
keep me in your life
Why would you still give me heaven
and ask me to be your wife
Why would you want me to marry you
when all I do is cheat on you
Author notes
this is for one of my ex-g/fs she knows who she is and I just want her to know I still love her no matter what is up.
I would say that I would take you back now but since I wrote this poem I have thought about it and I can find someone that wont cheat on me so Im moving on HEHEHE SO BE PREPARED FOR PART 2
Written June 27th, 2004
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Relationships can be the best thing and worst thing. Just gotta take the chance. Good job.
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'All the times I played you
Yet, I knew you were the one!
Honey I know that
things won't be the same.
So tell me Why....
Why do you still feel the same,
after all the shit I put you through
Why would you still love me,
when I didn't feel the same for you'
Wow, what a touching an phonminal write, i was blown away.
The way you put the feelings down and it is reader friendly, i can really feel the emotions venting from this!
Can you check out my poem, 'Dirty little secret' would love to hear your opinion.
You have talent, never give it up!
<3
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Well done. Don't let people walk all over you...espaically girls...we're shady like that. Nice write, Keep it up. I like your name too....Joey is such a cute name...
Anyways....keep writing. NEVER STOP.
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no one deserves to be cheated on i think your doing the right thing moving on
this poem rings true and touches many specially me,youll find the love thats perfect for you... great to see you back around..
Shanelle
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gret write!! pure emotion in this and it was expressed very nicely indeed. we also got a little of both sides which is always interesting lol anyway.. keep up the great work
crystal
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i like your poem its so emotional and i like how u expressed your feelings .....
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Hmm... get a little of both sides on that one, I like it Good job and keep it up.
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Great peom, very emotional!I like it a lot!
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