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Thoughts Are Things

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Not many think their thoughts
Could one day become things
To make or break, for weal or woe
So very few understand
That every word you use
Every thought you send
Is recorded, does affect
And will be reckoned
Unto you



Therefore, be assured
That your real intention
(whether self-aware or not)
Will never go unseen
The only one you can fool
for any length of time
Is ever, and has always been,
Simply and ironically
Your self





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'We are what we think. All that we are arises with our thoughts. With our thoughts, we make the world."

"Words have the power to both destroy and heal. When words are both true and kind, they can change our world."
~ the Buddha

"For nothing is hid that shall not be made manifest,
nor anything secret that shall not be known and come to light."
Luke 8:17


Written June 27th, 2004

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  • Hekate gold member
    April 17

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    Lmfao this is brillant. You're so right on with your words as always!! A lot of people think they can trick everyone but wind up fooling themselves and it's really sad when that happens.
    Ironic enough I kind of thought of JudgeJudy after I read this!


  • Sandal
    June 19, 2007

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    I was about to write you an essay, but I have my own page for that. Suffice to say, I agree completely, and your synthesis of ancient wisdom is much needed in this generation. Well done, well said.

    When I get a troubling thought, I return to Henry James: "Three things in human life are important. The first is to be kind. The second is to be kind. The third is to be kind."


  • maa gold member
    May 13, 2007

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    my wise friend,
    I was guided to your poem by synchronicity ...
    last night I had a weird dream : sitting in a class-room, a man, dressed in dark clothes, was teaching to the crowd. he said : "light and shadows coexist, depending on one another."
    I interrupted him, since I could see his aura trying to cloak the listeners with a veil of ignorance ...
    with a gentle voice and very slowly (rather unusual for me), I said : "light is real and depends on nothing, while shadows are unreal, depending on light falling on an object. no object, no shadow. the whole world of objects takes birth within our mind. the thoughts are objects that create shadows of suffering when light falls upon them. no thoughts, no suffering."
    everybody listened in silence, then the whole scene faded into nothingness ...
    I spoke in English, although it is not my mother-tongue (which is German), and I usually speak French in my daily life ...

    I don't know, but I felt very compelled to share this dream with you,
    thank yo so much for your patience and for listening,

    maa


  • second best
    March 7, 2007
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    i like this poem's simplicity; it really makes a statement.

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    November 30, 2006
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    Yes Andy, thoughts/attitudes not only dictate how one views one's life experiences, but they determine the actual experience itself. The Spirit is life; Mind is the builder and the physical is the result.

    Listen to the Theme from TIME

  • Andy Stephenson silver member
    October 10, 2006
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    A lot of people believe this and though to a degree I agree, to a large extent I do not. I do believe that thoughts dictate attitude and your attitude controls the way you view your life's experiences.

    Andy

  • raggyann
    July 25, 2006
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    how very true

  • MissStranger
    June 21, 2006
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    My words are useless!!! I'll keep this poem close to my heart!
  • Poetic Fanatic
    June 17, 2006
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    Profoundly Wise!

    Exactly Gennelle, (did I miss this)
    With our thoughts
    comes empowerment to our dreams
    which will leads us to all things
    we find to be in our reality.

    Thanks for a fine read that is more than worthy!

    Tommy

  • maa gold member
    June 17, 2006
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    dear gennelle,
    a precious teaching of wisdom indeed.
    I am very happy that you wrote about this subject, which is very dear to my heart.

    for those who doubt about the truth in those words, (especially in response to the person who reacted so "thoughtfully" to this poem), I would say :
    just think of something or somebody you love and then about something that upsets you. listen to your body's signs and response to those thoughts (emotion). well, on the long run, enhancing too many negative thoughts might damage the health of your body, mind and spirit. so watch out.
    plus, become aware of what you attract in your life : do people treat you kindly and lovingly, or do you realize that you get into trouble with almost everyone ? (of course, it is always the fault of the "other" ...). loving thoughts and actions will attract the same to you, be assured of this, my friend, whoever you might be ...
    brightest blessings to you on your path


    and brightest blessings to my dearest friend gennelle,
    in gratitude for who you are,
    marion

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 6, 2006
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    To karabi:

    Since what I have written about here has nothing to do with having an eidetic memory, or eidetic images at all - your statement has no relevance to this piece (except perhaps as a QED)

    Unless you are trying to say that the great sages like Solomon, Buddha and Ye'shua were all talking hooey? lol


  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 4, 2006
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    To karabi:

    According to what "psychologists"? And what world do you live in? So, the man made things all around you didn't start as a thought in someone's imagination? Not to mention negative thoughts and malice manifesting repercussions - just as good will and love produce positive effects.

    What is "iedetic" supposed to be?
  • karabi
    June 4, 2006
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    According to psychologists those who think that things that they imagine exist are iedetic idiots.

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    April 18, 2006
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    Indeed, Wendy, we are all gods in the becoming ...
    I think you'd appreciate this inspirational video, The Journey, from 'Conversations With God' by Neale Donald Walsch
    www.consciousone.com/wisdomflash/WFView.cfm?PID=148


  • wendy
    April 18, 2006
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    I have always believed this. If we are in God's image or are a reflection of a higher power, wouldn't that make us a God as well. I think so sometimes.

  • Ellis gold member
    March 5, 2006
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    Yes

    I agree with this poem -- that our thoughts and actions all are recorded by God.

    I believe, as we can preserve the images and sounds of people now dead, The Creator has, outside of time, done this for everything inside of time, -- where yet we are free to choose Love/Him and follow Love's/His plan for each of us, -- or not.

    --Ellis

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    September 21, 2005
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    Thank you, Rj Yes, the translations vary..
    "Our life is shaped by our mind;
    we become what we think.
    Joy follows a pure thought like a shadow that never leaves."

    However, that does indicate the converse by implication. We all render account, meet ourselves and our actions - so that is to 'render account', is it not?
    Karma, the immutable law of balance.. cause and effect. The Christ taught that too (the only way the Beatitudes can make sense ), no thanks to the early eccumenical councils' attempts to expunge such teachings.

    It can help to understand the truths in common by communicatio in sacris eapi.admu.edu.ph/eapr97/hans.htm

    ~G

  • Rj
    September 21, 2005
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    Speak or act with a pure mind
    And happyness with follow you
    As your shadow, unshakable..

    Couldn't resist finishing the stanza.

    I'm pretty sure the Buddha didn't mean to imply any reckoning.. Rather that the world as we see it begins in our minds. Possibly taken further that reality itself is a manefestation of our thoughts (from Hindu roots). Still this is usually taught as meaning that all of our actions and speech begin in our minds as thoughts. Manage your thoughts and you will avoid harmful speech and action.

    As to fooling yourself??? Likely, we all do. Likely the truth is often just too real and a dream, rational or excuse just works better to preserve our self identity. Self awareness may be a good thing, but knowing your fooling yourself, may just be the back edge of the sword for those who knowingly resist change. Blessed be the blind...

    Just playing devils advocate. This was a lovely write, based on a nobel truth. Gave me pause to think and dust off my Dhammapada.

    Peace,

    ~RJ~
  • pennywise2892
    September 16, 2005
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    Poignant. "Thoughts are things" is thought-provoking, so...I may be lying when i say - the lack of extravagance is remarkable. I tried to draw something phylisophical before I came to write what I just wrote. Stirring. De Stijl.
  • purefriendship
    September 11, 2005
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    AMAZING

    Gr8t work with such a special presentations.
    simple yet thoughtful display.
    AMAZING !

  • HeavenScent4U
    July 30, 2005
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    So much truth in this and you many people think they are fooling everyone when they are too blind to see what you have stated here. Woe to them when karma comes knocking. Be Well and Be Blessed

  • dark search
    May 26, 2005
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    I enjoyed this piece..these words are so very very true Maatkara....no more need really be said..you seemed to have said it all...anyways i have not been online here in a long time...i hope you are well...great job here as always
    dark search

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    March 10, 2005
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    Thanks MindOphelia But it is quite as long and as short as needed and intended.

    ~G

  • Watuwant silver member
    March 10, 2005
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    Beautifully stated, Maatkara, and so very accurate as well. Reminds me of a poem I'm working on that is similar in message. But this is lovely, and speaks truth, and thank you for sharing!
    peace
    doug

  • MindOphelia
    March 10, 2005
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    Hmm.. Very interesting. The lines were short, and I think you could extend this a bit more..
  • ecrivain01 silver member
    March 10, 2005
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    good job

    This is so true that's it's simply self evident. It reminds me, of course, of "The Guy In The Glass".

    http://www.mindfulofpoetry.homestead.com/

    It's on the bottom right side of the page. Anyway, well done and done well.

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    March 10, 2005
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    Thank you, Girl! Good question! Everyone has a choice, no one can take away our free will.

    ~G
  • IcAnOnLyBeMe
    March 10, 2005
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    Short....Sweet..Tried and True...GREAT JOB!! But on another hand, it got me wondering, why MUST we fool ourselves and only believe what we want to believe? hmmm...I'll get back to you on that one...Maybe were just too blind to see it?

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    March 10, 2005
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    Thank you, Linda! Give Sharron a big from me too. You'll be fine on the plane

    ~G
  • Red Red Rose
    March 10, 2005
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    Gennelle, I am going to visit our friend Sharron Corr for a couple of days. Together we are going to try to write a dynamite poem together, as we call ourselves the Twin Sister Souls.She introduced me to your writings and I will give her a kiss from you if you would like.I wrote a cute little ditty about her called "you Got Me Babe". We both love Cher, as I was blessed to have spent 30 minutes with her a few months ago. What a real person, in person. We had so much in common and we shared thoughts about how we accepted our gay children.If I ever get to Malibu, I have been invited to her home there, where she can be free from the fishbowl effect. Her firends are not in show biz and just sit in their jammies and laugh and swim.When I can scrounge up the cash, I will take her up on her offer.Just an afterthought, I just had to return and read this again as it soothed me. I am terrified of flying and my oldest son is a pilot.LOL So now I can go in peace and think postive thoughts on the plane. Thanks for making my day! Linda
  • Red Red Rose
    March 10, 2005
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    excellent

    First let me say that the picture at the top set the tone for this exquisite write.
    Our thoughts become reality
    We can make them real, but people don't see
    They have the power to empower themselves
    But instead, they store their thoughts on the shelves
    We are the masters of our every thought
    Your words of truth here cannot be bought.Glad you finally posted a song. Hugs,Lindarose XOXOXO

  • MYownFreedom
    March 10, 2005
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    thought worthy

    boy this does make you think before you speak, but great work.

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    March 10, 2005
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    Haha! Thanks Robin! Yes, I suppose it is rather didactic...but I'm no "Headmaster" (Mistress maybe )

    ~G
  • Invisible chick
    March 10, 2005
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    good job i really liked it
  • montez gold member
    March 10, 2005
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    Pretty good.
    I don't know if anyone else had this feeling, but whilst reading this, I felt like a little boy in school who's been naughty and is being admonished by the Headmaster!
    Well done.
    Robin.

  • suseann
    March 10, 2005
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    Masterful commentary

    Heavy karmic undertones. And ever so true. This in and of its self,is thought prevolking. Ops,I had better watch what I'm thinking. Good write, Lady answer to all my questions. Suseann

  • d a f f o d i l
    March 10, 2005
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    kool

    wow this was awesome...and so true...i really liked the way it flowed...you have some talent!!! definatly!! well done! even though it was short it was really gripping...i look forward to reading some more of your work maatkara...this was reallly reallly reallly good well done!! fern xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • klassy lassy
    December 24, 2004
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    Since we see what we believe as surely as we believe what we see, it behooves us to guard our thoughts. We do have that choice. This is a truth that can be demonstrated if one is honest within. It makes sense that you can't see your self "without " unless you first know yourself within.... And I do think you wrote it with dulcet tones...lol. It is beautiful in its simplicity.

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    October 25, 2004
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    And thank you, MuseStalker, for appreciating it!

    ~ G

  • MuseStalker
    October 25, 2004
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    Excellent

    Profound truth; succinctly writ. I enjoyed this very much - both for its pure poetry and its sentiment. Thank you for this gem.

  • onerios13
    October 15, 2004
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    OOoh...now this is DEEP! lol I thoroughly enjoyed that ending...it was exceedingly to the point, yet delivered in such a smooth and flawless way. I seriously thought this was kickass! ;D

  • dianes
    October 13, 2004
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    blew me away w/this write...very deep makes the reader really think. ty for sharing

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    October 12, 2004
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    Oh crap! I was hoping it would come across in more dulcet tones
    than that!
    But thank you!

    ~ G
  • Nicole Hanna
    October 12, 2004
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    See, now this is the brevity I'm used to seeing from you. Although this isn't my favorite from you, I can't help but simply adore your intelligence which just screams from every piece you write. Lovely, yet again.

  • MargaretG silver member
    October 5, 2004
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    Exquisite

    The Zoroastrian watchwords of "thought, word, deed" are quite appropriate to this poem. They say if the thought is good, then the words and actions will also be good.
    This is one of my favorites of yours, and I know others return to it as well.
  • EgyptianEyez
    October 3, 2004
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    wow, another amazing poem! I especially like this one because of the last four lines of the poem. it's awesome and so true, you cannot fool yourself. It has a very powerful message and had me reading on to see what you had to say next. Thank you so much for entering my contest and even more for deciding to share it at all. I also really appreciate your honesty

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    September 10, 2004
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    Thank you, AngelEyes!
    In sync with your motto, I think you may appreciate this:
    allpoetry.com/poem/605590

    Namaste,
    ~ Gennelle

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    September 10, 2004
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    Stunning beauty within truth..Thank you...

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    September 7, 2004
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    Thank you, Maureen! That is very true, but one must first learn to withdraw all projections (integrate one's Shadow) before it is possible to acknowledge that we meet self in others. As Jung said, "Your vision will become clear only when you look into your heart. He who looks outside dreams; he who looks inside, awakens."
    But, as Tolstoy said, "Everyone thinks of changing the world, but no one thinks of changing himself."

    ~ G

  • Maureen silver member
    September 7, 2004
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    Very nicely done! It has been said..If you want to know yourself, look at other people. If you want to know other people, look at yourself. It's hard to fool yourself when everyone you see is your mirror.

    Maureen
  • i luv cupcakes
    August 30, 2004
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    This is a very cool poem I loved it alot! and OMG I LOVE the picture!! It's so cool (I'm a little odd lol) You use the coolest pictures!

    Kayla

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    July 29, 2004
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    Oh, Duana! It only ends up sounding like Yoda on weed!

    ~ G

  • Duana gold member
    July 29, 2004
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    This is wild Maatkara, sdrawkcab. You gotta read it!!! No drugs meeded

  • thelastknight silver member
    July 19, 2004
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    We are what we think. So true. Its all comes around again. I liked this alot. Truths are best said simply and you have done so well. Thank you for this. I must read more of your writings. Sincerely, David

  • sol-mdw
    July 19, 2004
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    3/5

    I think that the thing I liked was the fact that this is all very true, to me at least. I strongly believe that thoughts carry power, and it is refreshing to see that written about. Good Job

  • Georges silver member
    July 19, 2004
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    Excellent

    Thoughts are indeed ripples in the pond and they all record on the cosmic hard drive. We may appear pure on the outside but our thoughts inside may be evil. Good writing and reflection on the actions (thought or unthought) on others.
    Georges

  • July 19, 2004
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    Yes. And there is no point in fooling yourself. It will just cause confusion into one's life. I enjoyed this poem very much.
  • pozo
    July 13, 2004
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    Cool poem that I liked a lot Well done

  • Flautist00
    July 12, 2004
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    This is nice, it flowed nicely and sent a good message. Nice write and God bless.
  • pozo
    July 5, 2004
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    Very truthful, well worded poem here- it leaves the reader with a sense of awe about the piece. Well done

  • BonnieQ silver member
    July 5, 2004
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    Excellent, excellent, excellent! Not only is the message in this brief but superb poem so true but also is very powerful. It reminds me of the scripture: "Whatsoever a man thinketh, so it is." The power of thought and of words is a sword that wields life or death: a mighty wicked member quick to violate "Thou shalt not kill."

    Our own thoughts can destroy us and our spoken words can destroy others: IF we do not have Christ in our lives, for it is through Him that we are capable of love and compassion as well as tempering that little wicked member.

    Technically, this poem is without flaw. What more can I say? Glowing adjectives pale in the light of this piece.

    Love and hugs, BonnieQ


    Edited on Jul 05, 1:36 because ''.

  • solace
    July 5, 2004
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    Thoughts are things, great concept. I think it is something that most people would agree with you on (at least after reading this), but no one ever really analyzed it. Great job, very well done. Stephanie

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    July 5, 2004
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    Thank you, Swan
    ~ G
  • Apurva
    July 5, 2004
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    I agree with all of them here. Well written.

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 5, 2004
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    Beautiful, Lady! Well done, well said!...swan

  • Konstantine
    July 5, 2004
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    Wow, so true. A great write. An interesting choice in visual presentation, but I personally enjoy it and feel it works if you think less and not more. Bravo!

  • queen Greeters member
    July 4, 2004
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    This is absolute truth you speak. Our thoughts can be real living things. That is why it is so important to think good thoughts. Amazing write. I love the topic. Queen

  • M.A.King
    July 2, 2004
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    this is an amazing insight. and just in living i have come to the same realization. we are responsible for every thought we have and they do manifest themselves in the tangible world. very wise words.
  • skinwalker 2
    July 2, 2004
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    earth~bound aloofness

    In my mind's eye ~ this is wonderful wisdom ,,the canopy of a prophet well seasoned in life's gardens ..The warmth and tenderness are the garments of who you are ..You are (((SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL)))~~((bOWS )) sKINWALKER

  • myrataal silver member
    July 1, 2004
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    Absolutely true ...



    Myra

  • dark search
    July 1, 2004
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    A very well worded and truthful piece here...i commend your insight....The universe, or creation if you will is within us...as we are within it...a thought or idea is born from us...as we were born from the creation and as creation was born from us...on the basic level it is all the same... all one..."the energy of creation" and it can make or break worlds....this is a topic i have thought much on ....and it is another wonderful thing you now give us all to ponder....sorry again about not commenting when i first looked at this...i always like to take time and think about what i read from you...and as you know i was busy....great work here...thanks for sharing
    dark search

  • Jaden silver member
    July 1, 2004
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    The great rishis from India believe thoughts are things and they take it even one step further...that things are thoughts.
    When you think about it, it has to be true. The universe is a 'thought creation.'

    But, what makes a thought stronger than another? The energy behind it- the concentration. So things have a way of appearing depending on one's energy...or how much energy is put behind the thought. In a universe of pure potentiality, it will come to pass...it has to.


  • On wings of lead
    July 1, 2004
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    This is a strange poem, though very well done...a little confusing though lol. I had to read it over just to understand it...which is a good thing in a way. It is an intellectual write, and at that an excellent piece. Great job!
    *^*synthesthesia*^*

  • Ava Noire silver member
    July 1, 2004
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    Very true in every aspect. You have pulled this off effectively. It is not over done, wordy - etc. And the message definately made me think.


  • quietly burning
    June 30, 2004
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    i like this very much ... how profound and true. It has also been said that our words are like magic, we need always to be aware of the effects and as u say, some day all will be reckoned

  • haikumonk gold member
    June 29, 2004
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    OMG..... this is stunningly honest. It's true to the core. This poem serves as an incredibly well written reminder of our spiritual place and physical effect within and on our lives and universe. This poem, if poorly written, could have come off really dumb and corney...and ho-hum.... but not.... you made your case perfectly. And, I thank you...

    Don

  • BillS2
    June 29, 2004
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    Insightful

    Hi Gennelle:
    I didn't have to read the last four lines to know who you were talking about. I did have to look up weal as I had never heard it used before. I had an idea, because of context, what it meant, but had to make sure. Interesting choice of words, weal and woe. I enjoyed this write as it was very insightful and other than the new word I learned, pleasing to read. Thank you for your lesson in being aware of our impact with the things we say and write. Bill

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 27, 2004
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    Thanks again M I appreciate your being on alert for me (as you know, sometimes I need it )
    But yes, specifically, I used 'affect' (transitive verb ) in the sense of: "move, touch (in mind or feelings); influence, make a material impression on."

    ~ G

  • MargaretG silver member
    June 27, 2004
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    Affect is the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion, and it does make sense in this context. Thanks for clarifying.
    You are entirely deserving of applause!

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 27, 2004
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    Thank you, for your comment and applause, M
    Actually I did intend 'affect' as I wrote it...that which moves, affects. The 'effect' I already covered in 'make or break, weal or woe'.

    ~ G

  • MargaretG silver member
    June 27, 2004
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    Well said

    Absolutely true. We are responsible for our thoughts. There are several great poems (including in the Bible) about how thoughts are turned into deeds and deeds into habits. It always bears saying again (I wrote a sonnet about it), because each person receives the truth in his/her own way.
    I think you have affect/effect confusion. I would have used effect for the result of what is done.

  • Duana gold member
    June 27, 2004
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    wow. another 'perfect' write. I need a new vocab because 'perfect' does not do this poem justice. The picture is simply amazing. It reminds me of the saying, about words being like a stone skipping in the water- making a ripple, and possibly having an unknown effect somewhere far away. Yet your poem, says it even better- words ARE things, are the effect in and of themselves. Very powerful, yet gentle write. Another one that needs to go beyond this site, and be published.
    The only sad thing is that so many people dismiss poetry as flowerly, and think essays are attention worthy...since being on this site I honestly think it is the other way around. So much said in this poem with not a single word wasted. Amazing!
    Edited on Jun 27, 1:27 p.m. because ''.

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 27, 2004
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    Thank you for your thoughtful comment Dee I always appreciate your insights very much.

    ~ Gennelle

  • MariGoes gold member
    June 27, 2004
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    Words have more affect and effect than many people can imagine.
    They may, sometimes, provoque an avalanche of thoughts in the mind of those who read them.
    Very well said G!
    Mari

  • Terry-too silver member
    June 27, 2004
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    Exellence spreads

    The ripple effect here is subtle but powerful. It accounts for the fact that some people we have never known before become sudden and lasting friends, and why without even speaking, some are best avoided. This is a topic books can be about, and by which, lives lived. --Dee

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 27, 2004
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    With which words, Peter? Yours or mine?
    ~ G
  • peter danielsen
    June 27, 2004
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    Weel Geeny, I hopy you dont fool your self with these words

    hugs,
    your servant peter

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 27, 2004
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    Thank you Nicolette Have you heard the "Theme From TIME"? You just wrote an almost verbatum quote from it. If you check my author page (bottom of the quote section) you'll find the link to the site, where you can read it (or listen: narrated by Laurence Olivier). I think you would love it.
    ~ G

  • Nicolette gold member
    June 27, 2004
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    Rippling wisdom

    Yes, our thoughts become words and words become actions...like a stone that is thrown into a pond it causes ripples and has affect... Very wise words indeed, my poetic friend! The picture fits the poem perfectly and add value to the content thereof. Powerful words and message - thanks for sharing this gem!

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 27, 2004
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    Thank you! Yeah, that is funny, I was just about to delete the picture...then I read your comment, and decided it did fit the theme after all. Hmmm, spooky huh?
    ~ G

  • zt
    June 27, 2004
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    Whoa! That's scary. I submitted my comment before you had the picture up...
    Edited on Jun 27, 4:05 because 'typo'.

  • zt
    June 27, 2004
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    Words so true and with biblical overtones. Once the power of thought is put in motion, the ripples spread across the pond in concentric rings that form a target that points to you. Nicely done!
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