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Three Special Keys

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When I was a young girl
my mother said to me
throughout your life
you need three special keys

The first is for knowledge
so do your very best
soon you'll open the door
with the key to success

The key to happiness
is for family and home
and to open your heart
to a child of your own

The last key you'll need
is for when life is done
it opens the door to
Gods Kingdom above

Before I use my last key
I'll hold my loved ones near
the story of the special keys
I will whisper in their ear
 

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Written June 26th, 2004

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  • Sunshinegf
    March 12, 2006
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    Wonderfull work onthis nice piece i loved it TO

  • shubs
    November 24, 2005
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    This is beautiful and I dunno how I missed this..a solution to life a resolution for eternity..with continuity built in with the baton passed lovingly to the generations to follow..and this poem evokes compassion..Shubs

  • live4eternity
    July 17, 2004
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    That's really neat! I like how you made this a simple poem and that you are going to pass on this little secret! How cute!

  • June 30, 2004
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    Great work

    I truly enjoyed reading this Sandy! I really like the wisdom this poem carries in it's message. It's wonderfully written, and it flows very well. Keep up the good writing and take care