I love you so much.
sometimes i have to stop,
take a deep breath
and make sure this all is real.
I ignore my friends,
they don't want me to be happy,
that is why they are lieing.
All they want is me and you over,
and me in my room
crying.
I hide in your arms,
hoping it will last,
trying to make the clock not run out to fast.
hold me near,
don't let my feared nightmare be real.
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Written June 26th, 2004
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hey..this is a good poem..it reminds me of the things me and my b/f went through in school about people trying to get you to break up..it sux...great write!
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oooooo sad write sorry bout what happened with ur b/f and gothic that was messed up but newyas love the poem pecially the flow great write keep it up
PsychoFreak -
okay? i heard you ran away. you should go back! -
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thankyou, something happened with Broken's b/f and me. she does not beleive me. i want her to be happy, i love her, but i want her to know the truth.
did u hear that leah? i love you and i want you to be happy, i just started thinkin about when u were over here on my birthday almost an entire year ago.. everything we talked about, and since then. im sorry, i dont care if u beleive me or not ok? i just wanted you to know. i love you leah, your one of my best friends. im so sorry ok? i love you hun.
chelly -
hey some people can be that way like it was said before but some may know something that you may not. trust me. my friend did the same thing with a guy i knew whos like 5 yrs older than her and she didnt know the stuff i did, and i told her she didnt believe me. so i guess what i am saying is becare full. neway good write. keep writing.
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awsome write i flowed pretty good to
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Yeah, some people can be jealous, but if they were real friends they would want you to be happy. A lot of people do that, dont let them bring you down. Good write, keep it up hun
LaLa
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