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"Home-made Cemetary"

Gloomy days,
Rainy nights,
Fill my heart with such delight!

Hate the red hot sun,
Love the silver moon
Bringing all my prey such doom!

Blood so crimson,
Skin so pail,
I'll slice your body leaving you so frail!

Necropheliac, sadist,
Madist!
I'll give you the worst pain and leave you dead!

Slit your throat,
Cut your veins,
Hang from my ceiling; its now your domain!

You'll never be seen again,
And I'll never be caught,
Dwelling happily ever after in my home-made cemetary!

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Devine Vengeance
Written June 25th, 2004

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  • Simi
    August 24, 2004
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    creeepy. shivers at homemade cemetry. This was really nicely done and I loved thw ay it flowed. I am trying to catch up with my commenting and will try and leave a line on all your stuff soon

    Love
    Effie


  • July 6, 2004
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    I like it and I like the story you are telling.


  • June 29, 2004
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    excellent

    really good write i loved it and it was dark to.good luck on the contest! only one thing if you could find a make the shade
    just little brighter!
    good write!
    excellent job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • deleteit
    June 25, 2004
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    na