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A Kentucky Spring

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The dogwoods are  bloomin among the Kentucky pines,
And the azaleas are blushing by the door
The mockingbirds are chirping in morning glory vines
It's a Kentucky Springtime once more

That old tired coon dog is snapping at a fly
And a kitten chases the  sumbeams cross the floor
Pretty girls are a primping  in a window passing by
It's a Kentucky Springtime once more

Last week there was tornadoes, thunderstorms and such
When that siren goes off then we worry much~


There's southern hospitality when neighbors come to call
And folks can't help but smile
When  they ask how are you all?
It's Springtime in Kentucky
Once again you see
For a Kentucky Springtime
Is a must you must see!

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Pic My Old Ky Home courtesy of www.google.com Public domain

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  • daviscth
    December 1
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    We really do live in a beautiful state sis. Your poem just reminded me of how much I love Kentucky. Nothing else would ever feel like home.

  • hezakiah
    November 27
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    It sounds beautiful there in springtime.


  • darlee77 gold member
    November 27
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    I was raised in a neighbor state, WV. This is a very good description of Ky. and an excellent write. Very good.

  • darlee77 gold member
    November 21
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    Nice. Judging after contest closes.


  • sgking123
    November 19

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    gee....

    tee..hee...lovely hospitable Kentucky.........meooow..purrrrr..am I loving in...purr me backee if you wanna have me visiting Kentucky..after this I must..lovely write animal flying off flea............beautiful

  • Nostalgic.....

    Can't help but to think of a country song as my eyes travel down this page.

    Well-written notions bring the season to life - the imagery is clear, and the flow? Fluid.

    I absoultely find myself adoring this line:

    "And the azaleas are blushing by the door"

    Near tears with that line. So very Lovable. Mmmmm.

    Love & Blessings,

    ~ ~ Janet ~ ~


  • Linrose
    March 26

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    A beautiful snapshot of Kentucky in the Spring...just what we need now after a long, cold winter! You've succeeded in bringing in so many sights and sounds that give us a wonderful taste of Springtime in your neck of the woods. I loved these lines: "And the azaleas are blushing by the door" and "That old tired coon dog is snapping at a fly". Great imagery, Susan! BTW, my husband's aunt lives in Paducah...anywhere near you?

    Linda


  • melphleg gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    Ah I want spring ! This is nice and warm not only in your painting of nature but also you painting of warm, neighborly hearts.

  • Bob Fox
    July 22, 2007

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    A truth

    & it was recommended that I read your poems. Picked this one because in 1967 I was stationed in Ft. Campbell . Tis a beautiful write. & funny.. 3/25/47 here


  • Ethereal One gold member
    January 20, 2007
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    love it!

    What a great poem Sis. It made me feel all cheerful, and I wish I could see Kentucky in the Springtime. Lovely imagery, and your rhyming is really great!

    Love & Hugs to you,
    Jeannette


  • Melodies
    August 20, 2006
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    It isn't springtime, obviously, as we are headed into autumn, but I am going to post this poem on Poetry Planet tonight because it is irrestibly lovely. Thank you for allowing me to put your poems in my 'lil poetry pocket and thrill the people worldwide with your sweet mind.

  • stailing
    November 26, 2004
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    Woohoooo!!

    Woohooo, I just simply adore this. I'm a bluegrass die hard and you just know Kentucky is mentioned in those songs!! This would be a terrific bluegrass tune!
    Awesome Write!!!


  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    November 10, 2004
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    Sounds like a wonderful place to be in the spring. I've been to Kentucky many times, as I have a brother living near Guthrie. Kentucky is a beautiful state, I must admit. I love Indiana, but I think Kentucky has more to offer in scenic beauty.

    Best wishes,
    Moses

  • Bigheadbob
    May 17, 2002
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    very nice. very nice state. ill be in paduca this weekend. im hoping it wont be raining. great poem.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    May 17, 2002
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    Thanks Nam tried that Ky moonshine myself just a few sips mind u was al it took for me (LOL)forgot that in my poem sure nuf bet you were happy (lol)Thanks for allyour comments appreciate them!
    All of you! Susan!


  • Nam
    May 17, 2002
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    excellent

    this reminds me of Florida spring-times.
    of course, you have better moonshine,
    the most i've seen stilled here is about 280 proof
    i had some kentucky moonshine that was over 300.
    let's just say i didn't walk for a week, but damn
    was i happy.

    :0)

    Nam

  • melmac
    May 17, 2002
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    excellent

    Sounds a little like where I go camping (in Australia).Everyone is so friendly and with each new season comes a great memory!
    Great words and great structure!


  • kvwriter silver member
    May 17, 2002
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    I love Kentucky, Susan, and you captured the rebirth season very well with this poem. Spring and fall are my favorite seasons. Thank you for sharing such a delightful write.--Kelly

  • soulful
    May 16, 2002
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    excellent

    beautifully done..smell those azaleas an the morning glory..

  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    May 16, 2002
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    Thanks Spring in Ky is lovely........
    Blessings susan


  • April Renee
    May 16, 2002
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    i like
    very nice

    ~*~adriana~*~

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