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Independence Day

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Independence Day is coming,
the celebration will start soon,
many homes have decorated,
with red white and blue ballons.

There will be hometown parades,
family picnics and such,
thoughts and prayers for our soldiers,
add that special touch.

As rockets burst with bright color
with a loud explosive sound,
be thankful it's only fireworks,
falling slowly to the ground.

When you hear "God Bless America",
as the high school band goes by,
pause a moment,be proud,
Old Glory is waving high.

Remember all our brave soldiers,
defending all our rights,
to enjoy our country's freedom,
on this special July night.
   
GOD BLESS OUR SOLDIERS

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This poem is for my grandson who is in the National Guards and all our brave men and women in the military,who will not be home this July 4th. Thanks to all of you.
Written June 24th, 2004

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  • omg

    OMG THAT IS SOOO GOOD!!!
    WOW!!! O MY GOSH!! THAT IS SOOOO GOOD!! PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!! O MY GOSH!! UR SUCH A GREAT WRITER!!! O MY!! THAT IS SOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!! WOW!! THAT IS SWEET U WROTE THIS FOR UR SON!!

  • gullionmar
    June 11, 2007
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    very nice

    well written and full of heartfelt pride for our country wonderful tribute


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 11, 2007
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      Thank you my friend. Wonderful comment. Thank you for supporting our troops and loving this great country of ours. God Bless America!!! Always, Sandy
  • Sunshinegf
    July 8, 2006
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    nice

    great work on this poem i enjoyed it
  • Sunshinegf
    March 12, 2006
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    excellent work on this piece i loved it

  • live4eternity
    July 6, 2004
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    I can tell you love your country, God bless-
  • bball
    June 24, 2004
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    Aww! i really love this poem! it started to make my eyes watery! thank you soo much for enetring!!
    ~bball
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