Many thoughts we have through the day
Some happy, some sad, some make us smile
Like a bird in the sky they change many times
Ones that linger in our minds makes us think
What will happen to us when tomorrow comes
Never knowing if we should take a chance
And express what is deep inside
If we keep it, it will not grow to what we want
To let it be known who knows where it will lead
Control holding us back from such bliss
An eagle soars high up in the sky
Such beauty my eyes do see
When images of you cross my mind
Thinking of you all day and into the night
Author notes
Written June 24th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
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400 points, ended June 30, 2004, 22 entries
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This was a wonderful flight.Your metaphor here was really pleasant.Brought to mind love helping ones spirit to soar.
Peace,Rob -
This is a beautiful poem, truly inspirational as well! Great write, you obviously have a talent, and thank you so much for sharing it with the rest of us on AP!
~kelli -
This is beautiful Magic LAdy - as all your poems are.
Sometimes daydreaming of someone or something can make out spirits soar " just like the Eagles". Thank you for the journey
I just took on this page
Cindy -
Nice write. Imagine being an Eagle...and flying high above
the Earth. Taking in the sights and seeing what no one else
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This is nice...If it were me I'd add commas and periods, but not everyone likes that. *shrugs*...good write and God bless.
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What a very beautifuly written piece. I think you did an excelent job on this
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Just after the Father In-laws death (recently) there was a bird of prey in the sky and I was fortunate to point this out to his three eldest Grandsons clarifying the spiritual significance. Any kind of bird of prey has a deep meaning, and your thoughts have caught this truly well. Such beauty and magnificence truly often brings out so much inspiration and thought in us all.
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Nice concept. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
Peace,
Lo
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I would assume that this was written for a loved one. It was very beautiful. A melting pot of mixed emotions. In my opinion, it is best to always express what we are contemplating within. We might never get the chance if we hold onto those feelings for to long. The next second in the unknown. At any rate this was another well written piece you composed.
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