"Controlled By Her Emotions"
A young woman's happiness and long lost dreams,
Blew strongly away like a lost ship at sea,
While searching for that special someone,
Only brought into her heart and life misery.....
Lonely and lost long ago,
In her innocent, youthful, tender years,
Cruel deceptions that played with her heart,
That brought out her sadness and unknown fears.....
She's locked up her emotions,
A lost key to an unopened door,
The one thats locked forever,
To a mask that can feel nothing more......
The mask that feels nothing,
Only succumbed to the numbness of pain,
Bitterness prevailed,
To a woman that feels she has nothing more to gain.....
And as she tries to go on with her life,
She strives and searches for something thats right,
But her life is sheltered, controlled by her emotions,
As her tears continue to fall onto her pillow at night.
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Written June 24th, 2004
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Marisa,
Now that really bummes me out if this is you!
I do hope happiness will come your way soon!! Hang in there, it will get better! 
TY for reading my poems and commenting! I am glad you enjoy my writting!!
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this sounds exactly how i am ... like real gaurded wow awesome write ...
marisa
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Hi Jade!!
Ohhh I am so glad you come to see(visit me..lol ) what I have wrote lately...I will certainly go to your poems after this...hope all is well your way..this poem I was inspired to write from a AP poets poem that gave me the idea to write this..it is so neat and fun to do when you read someones poem and your own ideas pop in...TY so much for all the nice comments you left me om my poems! I appreciate it a lot!
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spunky you have an amazing way with words and can seemingly turn just about anything into a great poem. I love the way you write about your friends and how your sympathy for them comes out with poems expressing your love for them. you are an amazing writer and a wonderful person.
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Hi Quickegreets!
This isn't a poem based on me...actually this is a poem based on another AP's poem called;
She Locked her Emotions Up
by Hells Angel 323 on Apr 21
In Category: Sad.
With her permission her poem gave me a idea on to write this so I did and this is the results..lol...And it is very true how many more can relate to heartbreak then anything else....too bad love can't overpower heartache pain!! soooo sad! TY for reading and commenting on my poem!
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Now come on I’m gonna switch that old metal detector on in your heart there and see if it finds that key for you again. (winks). I can see a lot of people sympathising with your thoughts here. Love is tough indeed all ups and downs. I’m hoping that things get better for you next time around. It’s strange how heartbreak has more in common with us all than does love itself. You ever noticed this in reflective thought.
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Kelsey,
I am sure too that we all have experienced this in our life and it sucks! I do try to make poems about life experiences and I seem to be able to write well about sad stuff...heee heee heee TY so much for your kind comment on my poem and I am so glad you like it!
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Ah! This is SOOOOOOO true... I can definately relate!!
Then again, I guess we can all relate to this at some point in our lives, huh? IDK! Maybe that's what makes it such a great poem!!! This is awesom! Keep it up!!
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a loser hu?! hmmmmmm, let me see here..you have a job and you write good poems! anyways, ty for the comment and applaud on my poem and you inspired this looser to write this so
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Wow, what a wonderful comment you gave me!! I only try to improve my writting and I guess it is working a little! LOL! TY cee's for the nice comment!
byeeeeeee!
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this is a great poem i love this you did a hella great job, sorry i couldn't help you come up with any idea, lol i'm just a loser like that and next time i Come over i want some damn crab dip lol j/k keep up the great work
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very nice
sweet spunky, your poem is so nice and deep thougs are seen as roots of poetic tree which gives shadow to so many new upcoming poets!" But her life is sheltered, controlled by her emotions,
As her tears continue to fall onto her pillow at night." This is so sad but with will happiness peeps thro' life again. A smile on the lips and a spark in eyes are the tools for a nice life to live! Thank u spunky for sharing the poem with us. Bye!
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Oh now ya got me wondering what you was expecting!! LoL! However your comment put a smile on my face cuz I think that is so cool how a writter can do that! TY for reading and your kind comment!
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LOL! Funny how you said,"Now I wanna read more" as while writting this poem it was almost hard to find a as perfect ending as I could find and when I thought I found it once I had to find another way to the ending! TY so much for reading this and the comment! I appreciate it!
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Ah yes angell eyez how I can relate to your comment! I especially felt that way when I was going thru my divorce! Took a long time to get past that with the emotions all wrapped up! TY for reading and commenting on my poem and I appreciate it!
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TY zealous for reading and commenting! I appreciate it!
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Wow, the way you turned her numbness into a controlled factor of her emotions. It wasn't what I was expecting. Nice write!
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TY so much for the kind comment on my poem!! I haven't been penning much lately as it seems I have encountered writters block so this is, your comment, good news for my ears!
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This was a great flow of emotion, lots of feeling...
get structure and rhyme too...
now i wanna read more...hehe
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I agree with RinoaH008.The ending rocked.A lot of people are controlled by their emotions.I'm one of them.Sometimes my feelings and emotions are like drugs and I just become addicted to them all at once.It's hard to shake sometimes.I really enjoyed reading this.Great write.
~Ro'Shawn
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Excelent! I loved it. Well done! *Zealous*
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I love the ending of this poem! Very well written and a lovely flow of words! Great write! It's very beautiful! Keep up the great work!
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