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A Latina's Corazon Y The Mirror.

Como a fairy tale do I recall;
Para una libro read to all.
For esta is written in rythm,
And all with a Latina's Loving Crime.

Yo estoy mirando a ti in this Mirror.
Con tus manos, you pull me tender.
Y con your strong hands, you guide me.
With such force--I can't breathe.

For with a quided movement of anticipation,
Estoy esperando for your dear creation.
Slowly you spread these legs que son caliente para ti.
All I need is you to kiss every inch of me.

Aye, Dios miyo! I can't catch my breath!
Dios bring me to heaven without death!
Con los angeles, I get nearer.
For I see how you move me in this Mirror.

Cuando you move in each different way!
To run your hands through me with little to say;
Para esta Latina, I can hold no more.
Si, Papi! Quiero mas que you have instore.

You don't rush me or tell me what to do;
Pero simply move me para tu.
Over these sheets, estoy con mis manos and knees;
Desiring more and whispering a simple, 'Please'.

Donde Estas? Mi Todo, Mi Carino, Mi Amor?
I see that wonderful mirror and not some door.
De esta cama, in complete position.
Entering with gentle force aiming for it's destination.

Aye, Papi! Full force tu eres Mi Rey!
Giving complete pleasure and no pain.
Con each desired thrust, quiero mas.
Your the only man that I haven't lost.

Here I come! Oh, Como un sueno!
It's a heartbeat away from todo.
Estamos juntos with every desire.
A mirror covered with steam and no fire.

Scents of jasmine fills the air;
Caught up in esta amor de una Latina to share.
The scent of mi vato rest upon me en este momento.
Caught in my memories and a mirror es mi corazon y todo.

Author notes

OK, please understand there are a number of words in Spanish. So, either brush up or pull out the Spanish Dictionary. Have Fun with this little exotic write!
Written June 23rd, 2004

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  • Brazos silver member
    July 15, 2004
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    Beautifully done

    Hey, enjoyed this, tho prob going to have to look over it for a while, to catch all the nuances, lol!
    "Here I come! Oh, Como un sueno!
    It's a heartbeat away from todo.
    Estamos juntos with every desire.
    A mirror covered with steam and no fire"

    Hey, I understand that!

    The language of love is pretty much understood by all, is it not, mi chica?

    My spanish is not good, tho I do understand some [and make a reasonable effort at the other], but I love this write of yours, it brings everyone together, and makes us speak the same language, LOL!

  • Candy N-G
    June 28, 2004
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    Thank you for your compliment. You seem to be the only one that enjoyed it. I suppose there really isn't a whole lot of diverse writers or readers~~Anyway~thank you


  • Jean- Paul
    June 24, 2004
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    Que magnifico...
    Who would have ever imagined "spanglish" would be anywhere near poetic?
    Chale!
    Bravo,
    J+P