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Pickin Day

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Pick a daisy,
pick a rose,
pick a splinter,
from your toe.

Pick some cotton,
pick some fruit,
pick that lint,
off your suit.

Pick up garbage,
pick up clothes,
pick up the kids,
don't pick your nose,

Pick an apple,
pick a peach,
pick a goal,
not out of reach.

Pick a college,
pick a school,
pick a class,
don't be a fool.

Pick a husband,
pick a wife,
pick a date,
start your life.

Pick a winner,
pick a tie,
pick a loser,
don't you cry.

Pick a tooth,
pick a fight,
pick the answer,
hope it's right.

Pick up the phone,
pick up the tab,
pick up a penny,
don't pick that scab.
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Pick a song,
pick up feet,
pick up tempo,
don't miss a beat.

Pick  a partner,
pick a dance,
pick a number,
take a chance.

Pick all day,
pick all night,
Pickin Day is over,
good night.

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Written June 23rd, 2004

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  • darlintlc silver member
    May 21
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    Always good for a laugh!!
    You're the greatest!!

    darlintlc

  • hahahahah! what a clever right! simplistic, yet it made me smile
    well done

    spreading the love,
    miley

  • Uniquely-Scarred gold member
    August 13, 2007
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    this was great, made me laugh, glad i read this *hu*


  • Candy6
    May 9, 2007
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    funny

    funny cute poem

  • Trafalger679Curious silver member
    April 11, 2007

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    Superb/Imaginative/Fun

    A really cool humorous write, indeed. I'll never think of the word "pick", in quite the same way again. Definately well done, just as it is.


    • Sandygram silver member
      April 12, 2007
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      Great Comment

      Thanks for stopping by and reading one of my older poems. I do appreciate it. You take care, Sandy
  • Puppydog gold member
    February 17, 2007

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    SO CUTE! HAPPY!

    The flow is amazing and everything you say has been done by everyone throughout life.


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 17, 2007
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      Lovely Comment

      Thank you Kevin. This was the one of my first attempts at poetry. I so appreciate your thoughts my friend!! It was a fun write, you take care, Sandy.

  • Khadidja the Wise
    February 1, 2007

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    I chose a poem
    Read it through
    And all I can say is
    Well done you!!

    I had to laugh when I read this poem, especially when you connected "pick up the kids" with "Don't pick your nose"...


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 1, 2007
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      GREAT COMMENT!!!!!!!!

      Hello there, I am glad this made you smile. This was a fun poem to write. The original contest I wrote it for was to mkake up a new holiday. So I chose Pickin Day. Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 26, 2007
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    Thank you for the comment and the applauses. Apprecuiate them. Sandy

  • Arsenic-
    January 26, 2007

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    Cute poem. Interesting that the stanza which ends in 'start your life' is all about relationships. Just soemthing that jumped out at me. There...you've been commented on.

  • sylva MD poetry
    September 30, 2006
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    happy

    it should be used as dancing poem

  • Sandygram silver member
    May 9, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah thank you again. Actually, this was for a contest where you had to think of a new holiday. I have no idea how I thought of it. But it is a poem that I cherrish. A young Christian on here read it and we started chatting and at the time I was a non Christian. Well he witnessed to me and called me every night Jason,(live4eternity) and on July 16 2004 I accepted Jesus Christ in my heart. He is like a son to me now. So this poem will always be special to me.Thank you for the lovely comment. God Bless you. Sandy

  • TallDrinkofWater
    May 9, 2006
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    Absolutely wonderful*****

    Another wonderful poem such delight, Another childrens book. I wonder have you though of that. You poems are so delightful I just want to read them out loud. So cute and fun and full of life
  • Sunshinegf
    March 12, 2006
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    good work onthis hummorist piece i liked it

  • Autumn Whisper
    January 14, 2006
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    whoa This is amazing grandma, I really love this, you have managed to make this rhyme perfectly, nice one, keep up the such funny poetry
    best wishes as always
    Moonstone Virgo

  • phantomoftheap
    January 3, 2006
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    Hehehehe., This was cool, hehehe I decided, your a good bperson to stalk, hehehe

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 5, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thanks so much for the wonderful comments. I am glad you enjoyed. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    March 17, 2005
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    Thank you so much. This was one of the first poems I ever wrote when I joined allpoetry last June. Thanks so muck for reading it and commenting on it. Take care, Sandy
  • nice tush
    March 17, 2005
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    i pick this poem to applaud, kept me interested untill the last word. well done

  • Sandygram silver member
    March 15, 2005
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    Wow how did you find this one. Thank you for the lovely comment. I so appreciate it. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Take care, Sandy

  • hottieChild
    March 15, 2005
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    AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT!!! WOOHOO!! very funny.... great job..
    *Katie*

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 25, 2004
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    Thank you Timothy for the nice comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 25, 2004
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    Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a nice comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    December 25, 2004
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    Thank you so much Michael. Take care my friend. Sandy
  • Michael 54
    December 25, 2004
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    Cute and Clever

    This is one very good cotton pickin poem. Where do you get your ideas? Keep up the great writing Sandy. Take care and God Bless. Merry Christmas.

    Michael

  • scarlettwind
    December 25, 2004
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    Funny and clever!!! lol

    lol. i thought this was very clever and funny. lolz again, good job! Until next time...

    You know you love me,
    Lauren

  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 25, 2004
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    This was so funny, and how creative you'd have to be to come up with this, I wish you well in the contest, and Merry Christmas too!

    -Timothy
  • synKROnicity
    December 25, 2004
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    keep on pickin! very cute and fun

  • Ancientson
    December 25, 2004
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    Delightful!

    I just 'picked a winner'!
    I love your name here, Sandygram.
    I'm going to your aurthor page now.

  • little-hug
    December 25, 2004
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    Ohhh this is so lovely and cute. .
    I love these words :
    Pick a partner,
    pick a dance,
    pick a number,
    take a chance.
    You are a great writer.

    Ellie
    (little-hug)

  • December 25, 2004
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    this is cute
    a little disturbing at times
    but overall cute

    it was very simple and easy to read
    you would b good at writing childrens things, minus the angst.

    it is a very nice poem


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 25, 2004
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    GOD HAS TRULY BLESSED ME WITH YOUR FRIENDSHIP

    I can not believe you put this on the feature page. You are so going to get it dear friend.It's a good thing I love you. That was so sweet of you. Thats present number three you have given me. God bless you my friend. Sandy
  • fallendreams
    December 25, 2004
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    This is fun to read. It has a good flow to it and it easy to read. I don't find many like this when I look around and I am glad I found this. Thank you for sharing it.

  • neurosine gold member
    December 25, 2004
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    It certainly is a picking day poem. I had to pick my nose after reading it.

  • live4eternity
    December 25, 2004
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    this is just as funny as the first time I read it!

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 4, 2004
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    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy Great contest
  • GoGo
    October 4, 2004
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    HAHAHA!!! this was great!!! so much picking to be done. wow, best of luck!

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 15, 2004
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    I'm glad you got a smile from this poem. I only started writing poetry in June and this was the second poem I had ever written. I am glad you enjoyed it. Take care Sandy
  • abdulrahman
    September 15, 2004
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    Pick a winner, pick a tie,
    pick a loser, don't you cry,
    pick a tooth , pick a fight,
    pick the answer, hope it's right,
    pick up the phone, pick up the tab,
    i love thi though keep ur well writing ok it had to learn and easy to read so be great ok nice pome heere perefect
  • Napkin
    July 29, 2004
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    Made me a-smile! Nice little humorous piece with a whole bunch of little messages inside! Great Poem!
    By and By
    Evy

  • Wizzy Jo
    July 29, 2004
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    I like this Its great, theres somehting about it I just really like but I just cant point it outlol Great write here well done thanks for entering my contest and I ish you the veyr best of look in my contst
    Rowena Jo

  • Anais Elaine
    July 21, 2004
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    Made me smile

    I really like this one Sandra made me smile so many times.
    I love everything about this piece, the flow, the smiles I got, the rhyme, I am so glad you're writing poetry, because the world has surely missed out before your grandson gave you the computer, we have a lot to thank him for.
    Take care and good luck in the contest
    Elaine

  • Dropp Deadd
    July 7, 2004
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    I just totally like it!You did an amazing job.I like the idea.It's so funny.Rock On!!!
    xx
  • mrx200417
    July 7, 2004
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    Great poem! I really enjoyed it a lot! Keep up the great work.
  • starfish246
    July 7, 2004
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    This poem was adorable! It flowed perfectly! Best wishes in the contest! I hope that you get first! Keep it up!

  • shootingstar101
    July 7, 2004
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    ahh that was awesome!! if i would have read yours before i wouldn't have even written one for this contest! i hope you win! that was cute, funny, and inspirational all at once!! great job! good luck! you so have to get first!

  • live4eternity
    July 6, 2004
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    Do you know that I am laughing hysterically RIGHT NOW? While clapping my hands, You are brilliant. That is soooo funny! I love your style, you are sooo funny. Very intellegent. I can't wait to read more from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • June 24, 2004
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    i loved this! i thought this was so well written! keep you the great work!

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 24, 2004
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    I only started writting poems two weeks ago, this was the third one I wrote. I just wanted to write a silly poem and this popped into my head. I'm sixty years old and learning to write is such a pleasure. I'm glad you liked my poem.

  • Anaiya Illyria
    June 24, 2004
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    this is a good poem thanks for the entry, just out of curiosity where did you get the idea for this holiday?
    ~Amanda
    ~*~*~*483 days*~*~*~
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