In the moonlight
Gazing at your beautiful face
In the moonlight
Your eyes agleam,your smile so bright
I thank the dear Lord for his grace
For me there is no nicer place
In the moonlight.
Author notes
Prompt 2.Moonlight
Written June 23rd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Tell me about the Moon, Sun, and the Stars by blackevil.
300 points, ended June 3, 2005, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Take Me By Moonlight. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended September 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Moonlight by crivanea.
300 points, ended October 4, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice form..i love reading different form of poetry..nice description..thnx for the entry..best of luck in the contest
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Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thats so awsome! I really like this poem... its happy
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The moon will always be romantic. Glad you enjoy the moonlight enough to write a sweet poem referring to it. Nice wording. The only flaw is you need a space after the comma.
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i liked this poem i really did, but i must say it is very beautiful, and the flow is good until you get to the line....i thank the dear lord for his grace....you take a poem where you are speaking of anothers beauty and throw it into that. it kinda throws the entire peice off. it is beautiful none the less
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yeah, good job. I like fairy tales, and i like tha moon. d sweet.
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Sounds fairytailish.
that's okay cuz that's how life should be 
.Very cute poem. Gives off a peacful feeling...Good Job!
Jess
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