She...was beautiful and I loved her
But she was stuck, swallowed by sorrow
She woke with everyday hating her tomorrow
I tried to help did all I could do
gave her hope told her whats true
But depression, that bitch, took her from me
The love of my life, a soul no one would see
I loved her passive ways, her goofy smile
She was the one, that made my life worthwhile
When I looked into her eyes, past the sorrow they would show
I could see me re-kindle her fire, I would watch it grow
I remember when we made love, our soul's becoming one
But as the days went by, happiness was none
I knew it was coming, I could see it in her eyes
The pleading for help, the scars, the silent cries
I would kiss her wrists, tell her its okay
She just couldn't hold on another day
that night was so eerie and silent, in the distance, mocked death's crow
and as long as my baby held on, she had to let go...
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Written June 23rd, 2004
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this was a good poem and I am glad I stumbled across it. I just wanted to let you know that you have it lucky where you live. If you lived in my town and was gay... well they treat anyone thats not THE SAME.... horribly. I hate this small town! Good for you letting out your feelings. Great job on this poem. *hugs*
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WOW. Another good write. Great imagery, and rhythm, and... UGH it was so good! Your poems are awesome, by the way, and never let anyone tell you different. You're also a very talented writer. Stay strong, and don't give up!
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this poem is so sad...but its beautifully written and i like the rhyming. thanks for abling me to read your wonderfull writing. take care and keep writing.
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wow... this is grate i mean you are one of my favs on hear and i think you know why your are grate your poems feel so real and some may not be but wow i mean this is a grate poem verry real maid me think it was to this is grate good job i really mean it you blew me away
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very good poem... liked it a lot keep it up. going to look at more of your poems later. mayb you could look at a few of mine? neway great poem! keep it up -
nah..its not true, but it happens to alot of people, thanks for the comment!
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Oh my God! I love this poem! I can relate to it so well. I really like it. It's got nice imagery, and nice rythm.. I hope that this isn't a real event in your life, and if it is, I'm so sorry, but this is an AWESOME poem!! Good job!!
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