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Again

I fell again for the scent,
The walk, the talk.

I fell for the sound,
The hug, the touch.
I fell again, and again for LOVE...

I fell for the smile,
The look, the mood.

I fell for the sweetness,
The groove, the move.
I fell again, again, and again-
Back in LOVE with You...

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Written August 24th, 2003

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  • SimplySakina
    November 15, 2005
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    damn sister all i have to give you is a beat a mic and ther you go taking on the world stage...

    this feels more like a poem to recite aloud than to read, try it, it might work...


  • Andy Stephenson
    April 15, 2005
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    I already have a working melody. Might squeeze it in next.

    Andy

  • Andy Stephenson
    April 15, 2005
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    This is quite a beautiful poem. Reminds of an Anne Murray song.
    I think it could easily be expanded into a song. Might try it sometime later. I made a note, but you might remind me. I've got five or six songs I need to finish first.

    I am very glad you like my poem enough to read it twice. Can you print it?

    Andy

  • In youre arms
    June 22, 2004
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    Nice, very nice written. Keep up the good work.