no rules
no written consequences
no innocence
everything left to fate
all fend for self
can't depend on strangers
they may betray you
the strong may rise
the weak fall
and so we revert back to days of old
when no justice was met
unless one took it as their prerogative
but the evils of politics is gone
no more world-wide government threat
no MAN to fight against
so...
who came up with this idea again?
Author notes
umm this is for the anarchy category............... .... ......... .... oh yeah...... Rancid
Written June 22nd, 2004
A contest entry
- What do these words mean to you? by Miss Belligerence.
300 points, ended June 30, 2004, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I've been reading muy poems and the comments made on them and I'd like to take this time to say..
Krytal is insane....
..and not the good insane -
burp
poopoo i love you lets get married and have lots of little christinas running around! kiss me kiss me and i'll show you how good it feels to be a pumpkin! love you know who! and if not its your one and only krystal -
excellent
brilliant poem - raw - grit - and eloquently put together with a twist - excellent read too
billy -
Pretty straight forward I'd say. I also enjoyed the double sidedness of this poem, you do have both points of view in there. The last line poses an interrogation which leaves us with your poem in mind. Very good! and you have nothing to be intimidated about
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I like this... the flow was flawless and I really enjoyed the ending! Good luck in the contest!!
-Kelsey -
Thank you for entering my contest! I really liked your poem and thanks for reading the rules. I really liked it. Good luck!
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