heart beating, pounding
feelings wrapped up in you
souls singing, merging
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Written June 22nd, 2004
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How pretty. Love is such a lovely thing. It's good to be in love... And sometimes it's bad.. O.o;;
Well anyway good job on this haiku and keep writing!
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thank you. It was my first attempt at a Haiku.. glad to knwo someone out there liked it
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emotional involving
in just three lines i think u managed to say a lot of things. i t was also possible to me to almost picture the emotions this haiku portrays. nice piece. i like ur style
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