GOODBYE,
I HATE THAT FUKKING WORD
I DONT GET IT
HALF THE TIME
IT ISN'T REALLY GOODBYE.
THAT FUKKING WORD
DONT EVER SAY IT
AND THEN COME BACK
I WONT BELIEVE IT
I WONT ACCEPT IT!
GOODBYE,
IT'S JUST A DUMB EXCUSE
A FUKKEN DUMB ONE
TO GET AWAY FROM THE TRUTH.
GOODBYE,
DOESENT MEAN GOODBYE
IT'S GOT A HIDDEN MEANING
LIKE FUK YOU
YOU DIRTY STUCK UP HOE
HOE?
IM NOT A FRICKEN HOE
A DAMN GARDEN TOOL
YOU UGLY CUNT FACE LOSER
YOU OUGHT TO BE KILLED
DUG IN A HOLE,
YOU SAID THAT FUKKING WORD
GOODBYE,
I HATE THAT FUKKING WORD!!
Author notes
MEH
Written June 22nd, 2004
A contest entry
- Show Me What You've Got by LostParamour.
500 points, ended September 16, 2004, 61 entries
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wow. this piece is definitely filled with angst/anger, and the reader can feel it.
thanks for entering and good luck <33 -
ha I like the anger you put into this, made it powerful. Nice job.
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If this is connected to "Goodbye" and "Goodbye Was a Lie" it sounds like you're having a real problem with this guy not knowing for sure what he wants...if this is the case, i wish you the best of luck. You'll come out of it stronger no matter what happens. Your poems are very well written and extremely emotional, keep up the great writing.
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Wow. you sounded really pissed.
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lol nice poem i agree that word isnt that great
keep up the good work ......your poems are very strong and emotional !! i like it !! i like your motto too...
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