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maybe then you would love me

i cant do anything right
im just a fuck up i guess
all you do is complain
im sorry im bad
and that im not perfect
im sorry im embarising
and that i look differant
and i dont look the way you want
maybe if i wore tighter clothes
and looked a little girlier
or if i wore brighter colors
and looked a little happier
maybe then you would love me
maybe then you would care
maybe then you wouldnt disown me
maybe then you woulod be there

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Written June 21st, 2004

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  • Hamsandwich
    June 21, 2004
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    i'm going threw almost the exact same situation with my mom except she just badmouths me insted of disowning. i feel really really bad, I know, my mom is "ashamed" of me because the kids at school call me "gothic' and i am not a whore, i guess thats what she wants.

    anyway don't ever give in,
    i go by these words
    I've been blessed with the inspiration
    To take what little I have and always strive

    Sometimes surviving is all that you can do
    I never claimed to have all the answers of the solutions
    My satisfaction is knowing, that my desires will not be killed
    With a readiness to defend what is mine and never compromise. --Hatebreed


  • InsaneAlice
    June 21, 2004
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    You shouldn't feel you have to change yourself for anyone. If they really loved you, they would accept you as you are. Wear what you want, look however you want. You're an individual, and that's what makes you YOU. You're special and you're beautiful, and don't let anybody make you believe otherwise.
    Love Ali xxx