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way back when

i just wanna sit and play
like i used to
back in the day
back when i was happy
back when i was young
back when times were good
back when life was fun
i think about the past
how i used to sit on daddys lap
back when he loved me
back when he cared
back when i was his baby girl
back when he was there

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Written June 21st, 2004

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