When the lights go out
and im all alone
there are things that no one knows
no one knows
no one see's
no one hears the crys and screams
no one see's the tears run down my cheek
no one knows how i feel!
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Written June 21st, 2004
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I like it
I can really relate to what your poem says. The fact in which it tells how no one sees the tears run down your cheek it shows how you like to be alone when you cry. It's deep and I like it a lot. -
Another great work of yours. Short, but full of meaning! I like the way you write!
And I can relate. Good job!
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good
this is good, i like it!
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