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I know you hate me...Dont lie

Why cant you just leave me alone?
just shut up!
dont bitch and moan
why cant you stay out of my life
get out
you dont need to think twice
you say you care and its for my own good
but i know you would give me up
if you only could
you can tell me what you want
you can lie to my face
but i know to you im just a big discrace
i know your embarsed
i can tell from the glares
im sick of trying to please you
ive done it for way to long
you always made me feel bad for wrong things i have done
so look at me
look me in the eye
and tell me that you hate me
its ok cuz' tonights my last night

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Written June 21st, 2004

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  • horrorfanatic
    June 21, 2004
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    Really Good

    wow this is really good, i love it!